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Array ( [sid] => 89008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Cold Cold Heart [time] => 2005-03-27 22:09:55 [hometext] => Etched in stone [bodytext] => Love O'love Where are you now
I'd like to know
Don't'cha think you did me wrong
What happen to our song
We've grown so apart
It's broken my heart
I'm so scared
and you don't care

What ever happen till death do we part
I can't go on being broken apart
Is it etched in cement
Your cold cold heart

Don't'cha remember when we were young
The love we had the way it begun
Over a soda at the dairy bar
Jimmy Dean was our favorit star

We walked in the rain
and we dreamed
as young lovers do
Don't'cha know I'm still in love with you

Why do you walk away
I need and want you to stay
I pray----everyday
Please please don't walk away

I want you
I kneed you
I love you
Please please stay

I can't take you cold cold heart
How can I live when were apart
Can't we make a new start
Beating tgether both our hearts

Sinned [comments] => 7 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 24 [informant] => sinned [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Your Cold Cold Heart

Contributed by sinned on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:09:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Love O'love Where are you now
I'd like to know
Don't'cha think you did me wrong
What happen to our song
We've grown so apart
It's broken my heart
I'm so scared
and you don't care

What ever happen till death do we part
I can't go on being broken apart
Is it etched in cement
Your cold cold heart

Don't'cha remember when we were young
The love we had the way it begun
Over a soda at the dairy bar
Jimmy Dean was our favorit star

We walked in the rain
and we dreamed
as young lovers do
Don't'cha know I'm still in love with you

Why do you walk away
I need and want you to stay
I pray----everyday
Please please don't walk away

I want you
I kneed you
I love you
Please please stay

I can't take you cold cold heart
How can I live when were apart
Can't we make a new start
Beating tgether both our hearts

Sinned




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Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:14:04 PM AEST
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Some times u jus have to let go.
Hang tuff. great write.
huggs,
emy


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:40:51 PM AEST
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A sad, heartfelt and deep write. Expressed so well and with alot of emotion. Brillance at its best. A sad, but outstanding write.
Hang tuff my friend.
Hugs,
Sue


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by skadmatrix on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:10:48 AM AEST
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i really like this, its a good point, going through a divorce as a child i kinda realize the onesided love thing, but if your partner is that cold the best thing to do is leave =(


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:22:37 AM AEST
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Oh this was good, you're emotions where powerfull showing so much emotion on it.

Well done.

Jane


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:04:58 AM AEST
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I have to stop reading poetry like this, lol, it makes me feel too much. power in words. Amazing write. Maybe because I can relate... it was great. Sad, made me sad, but that just reinforces the fact it was a good peice. Loves it!


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Marisa_A_Sydney on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:49:12 AM AEST
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hi.. wonderful write. it conveyed such longing and pain. continue to write and express, i love reading it..

marisa


Re: Your Cold Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:23:25 PM AEST
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WELL YOU NOT AFRAID TO EXPRESS YOURSELF , AND THATS GOOD. YOUR POEM WAS DEEP.




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