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You touched my heart and held my hand
You taught me love and spoke in words
That only hearts can understand

But then our world came crashing down
All that seemed strong to dust was turned
I fell from love to deepest hell
In searing pain my heart’s heart burned

One minute high in heaven’s skies
The next in death from bleeding heart
The deepest pain I think I’ve found
My soul now mourns that we’re apart

Yet still it fades
With memories and shades
Of holding your heart
Of holding your love

“Teardrops fall from eyes and heart as he turns away for the last time.”
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Holding Your Love

Contributed by wachumiri on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

With deepest love you touched my life
You touched my heart and held my hand
You taught me love and spoke in words
That only hearts can understand

But then our world came crashing down
All that seemed strong to dust was turned
I fell from love to deepest hell
In searing pain my heart’s heart burned

One minute high in heaven’s skies
The next in death from bleeding heart
The deepest pain I think I’ve found
My soul now mourns that we’re apart

Yet still it fades
With memories and shades
Of holding your heart
Of holding your love

“Teardrops fall from eyes and heart as he turns away for the last time.”

Copyright Â© wachumiri ... [ 2005-03-26 20:13:35]
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Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Avernus on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:18:50 PM AEST
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Very well written. Sorry for your loss. I think we've all been there at least once

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:48:48 PM AEST
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I know how that feels. The heart always hurts when love is lost

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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Wow...this poem is so beautiful. I think this is one of the best things that you have written. Sort of out of your style, but lovely nonetheless. I am sorry, and I did love you too. Let God take your pain, and have him assure that you are now following His path for your life. Just close your eyes and let Him lead...you're good at that.
~Carrie~

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:36:42 PM AEST
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heart wrenching stuff - this poem kept me glued from the first minute

a sad poem but its an inspiring piece of writing!

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:26:20 PM AEST
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david, this is so beautiful... i hope your feeling better, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:58:10 PM AEST
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I feel your sadness as i read this.........keep up the faith............Love will come your way again

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:46:23 AM AEST
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This brings tears to my eyes. Emotional and honest write.

Re: Holding Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:58:58 PM AEST
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Oh David you brought me to tears with this write. My heart absolutely breaks for u. I'm so sorry for I knew how much u loved her. U shall not be alone my friend. I'm always here 4 u. May ur beautiful heart heal soon.
*heartfelt hugs* to my dear friend,
Sue

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