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Array ( [sid] => 88861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cleansed [time] => 2005-03-26 18:23:08 [hometext] => *** With enormous thanks to Jonathan, who I knew exactly nothing... and everything... about when I wrote this. It is because of his prodding (and more in his style than my own, I might add) that this came forward. *** [bodytext] =>




There must be quite a few things that a hot bath won't cure, but I don't know many of them.
~Sylvia Plath~



I only half heard the continuous splash
Of the water falling wearily into the tub
From the far away, invisible, silver faucet.
(some distant part of me, half thought that
it sounded exactly as things do in dreams)
And I barely felt the water warming then
As it closed in around me, cradling me…
I was too busy contemplating how heavy
The book had suddenly become in my hands.
Heavy it was with voices, countless voices,
Begging, each of them, to be heard -
The New American Poets of the 90’s
Were crying out.

Wet handed, I flipped from page to page
To hear little girl Molly whisper from the chair
Followed by the sound of Li-Young’s cleaver
Contemptuously splitting her poem in two.
Voice for voice, page by page
I fell to them – listening to the echoes
Of long ago and yesterday and never-will-be.
It was Richard, I think, who first sounded like me.
(“not at all by design had I lingered”
there, half expecting the tub to overflow)
And when Richard told me that he may disappear
If he simply closed his eyes, I closed mine
To see if I would.

But it wasn’t until glorious page one fifty one
That I found Jonathan and fell madly in love
As he first rambled simple to profound
Before turning profound to something obvious.
I wondered if others had been able to hear him
Amongst the eighty nine other insistent voices
Like Norman, Linda and especially Beckian
(who used lovely half speak to smash clouds
Open like fruit, bringing finally then the rain)
Deciding it didn’t matter – I drew myself up
And stepped out of the tub, renewed.
I smiled at my reflection, knowing exactly
What I must do.



The idea that one can open a book and hear a voice is amazing to me.
~Jonathan Holden~





(Authors note: Remarkably... I found the Holden quote almost immediately after writing/posting this piece. Imagine.)

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Cleansed

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic: poets






There must be quite a few things that a hot bath won't cure, but I don't know many of them.
~Sylvia Plath~



I only half heard the continuous splash
Of the water falling wearily into the tub
From the far away, invisible, silver faucet.
(some distant part of me, half thought that
it sounded exactly as things do in dreams)
And I barely felt the water warming then
As it closed in around me, cradling me…
I was too busy contemplating how heavy
The book had suddenly become in my hands.
Heavy it was with voices, countless voices,
Begging, each of them, to be heard -
The New American Poets of the 90’s
Were crying out.

Wet handed, I flipped from page to page
To hear little girl Molly whisper from the chair
Followed by the sound of Li-Young’s cleaver
Contemptuously splitting her poem in two.
Voice for voice, page by page
I fell to them – listening to the echoes
Of long ago and yesterday and never-will-be.
It was Richard, I think, who first sounded like me.
(“not at all by design had I lingered”
there, half expecting the tub to overflow)
And when Richard told me that he may disappear
If he simply closed his eyes, I closed mine
To see if I would.

But it wasn’t until glorious page one fifty one
That I found Jonathan and fell madly in love
As he first rambled simple to profound
Before turning profound to something obvious.
I wondered if others had been able to hear him
Amongst the eighty nine other insistent voices
Like Norman, Linda and especially Beckian
(who used lovely half speak to smash clouds
Open like fruit, bringing finally then the rain)
Deciding it didn’t matter – I drew myself up
And stepped out of the tub, renewed.
I smiled at my reflection, knowing exactly
What I must do.



The idea that one can open a book and hear a voice is amazing to me.
~Jonathan Holden~





(Authors note: Remarkably... I found the Holden quote almost immediately after writing/posting this piece. Imagine.)





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Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:48:48 PM AEST
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thank goodness for happy endings : ) i love the conclusion you've come to here, and hope Jonathan comes by to fix any and all blocks more often. you wrote with a lot of description too, which is always a joy to read. this seems to be a pivotal write, and it was great to read at the same time.


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:10:37 PM AEST
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This really is beautiful. It has a memoirs feel to it and such depth. I mean the deep, understanding & unspoken knowledge that others could not even imagine.

Fascinating, and I applaud you. (You deserve it)

K-


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:05:46 PM AEST
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Wow - I totally loved this piece! It is so very you (like you tend to say to me). The photo is wild too! He's like your gaurdian-angel fairy-grandfather now. :) And I imagine I am certainly not the only other one who loves it when you are inspired!
I especially liked:
"listening to the echoes Of long ago and yesterday and never-will-be."

and

"But it wasn’t until glorious page one fifty one
That I found Jonathan and fell madly in love
As he first rambled simple to profound
Before turning profound to something obvious."

*repeat everything Happiness said here
I love the reads that transform. Inspire. Take it run!


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:53:28 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem! Absolutly lovely! Thank you so much for sharing this one with us!

Carol (Who really, really dug this poem.)


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:45:37 AM AEST
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Luv the quote about the bath. I tottally agree with all the comments. A masterpeice almost as great as the awesome hot soak in the tub.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:12:03 AM AEST
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Strong and beautiful. Wonderful write.


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by Vistar on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:12:25 PM AEST
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Wow. That was VERY interesting.
Good work there!


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:03:00 AM AEST
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Maybe you should have bottled that tub water and sold it as pure inspiration!
If I have anything to say at all about this write it would be that every single one of those writers that inspired you would be honored to have been mentioned by the writer that you have become.
Your writing never dissapoints me and I thank you for that.


Re: Cleansed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:07:53 PM AEST
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*applauds emphatically*

Another beautiful poem!!!

It's so inspirational and now I find myself wanting to read that book too.

Timbo




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