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Array ( [sid] => 8882 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thrashed [time] => 2002-12-19 10:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => High
From your weed
Daddy
Made me so unpure
With a queer smile
Groping
I don't know
If
I like that
Others do
Please stop
No more
Drunken mascarades
No nude potraits
Mr. DaVinci

Lil' Kim
So sexy
Peaches
I cream
When you're south
Of the border
Drank one to many
No more
Dirty Mexicans
Give me something good
This bottle of Vodka
Empty
This blunt
Far gone
Turn the volume up
And the lights down
Now the party
Really starts

Up on the table
Make me sweat
Work it so good
Cause
I won't remember
Any of this
Tomorrow
To far gone
Dry heaves
Pass out
Another drink
Please

Head
Muff divin' brothers
Unite
For one hell
Of an orgy
Oops
Wasn't suppose to say that
Was I
Better end it
Before
I get in
Some real trouble
But
Peaches are good
Muff divin' is skill
And I
Drink like a lush
And smoke like a chimney
See ya
In Hell
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Thrashed

Contributed by ml02 on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

High
From your weed
Daddy
Made me so unpure
With a queer smile
Groping
I don't know
If
I like that
Others do
Please stop
No more
Drunken mascarades
No nude potraits
Mr. DaVinci

Lil' Kim
So sexy
Peaches
I cream
When you're south
Of the border
Drank one to many
No more
Dirty Mexicans
Give me something good
This bottle of Vodka
Empty
This blunt
Far gone
Turn the volume up
And the lights down
Now the party
Really starts

Up on the table
Make me sweat
Work it so good
Cause
I won't remember
Any of this
Tomorrow
To far gone
Dry heaves
Pass out
Another drink
Please

Head
Muff divin' brothers
Unite
For one hell
Of an orgy
Oops
Wasn't suppose to say that
Was I
Better end it
Before
I get in
Some real trouble
But
Peaches are good
Muff divin' is skill
And I
Drink like a lush
And smoke like a chimney
See ya
In Hell
In a few

Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2002-12-19 10:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thrashed (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:19:06 PM AEST
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I think this poem is okay but the commet you made about Mexicans is not very nice......Shouldnt you show respect to others and not be racist......Well i g2g.

Re: Thrashed (User Rating: 1 )
by ml02 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:52:57 AM AEST
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a "sloppy mexican" is a name of an acholic drink

Re: Thrashed (User Rating: 1 )
by ml02 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:54:09 AM AEST
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A "sloppy mexican" is a name of an acoholic beverage, i wasn't being racist in the comment , i was talking about the drink

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