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Array ( [sid] => 88793 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning In Your Love [time] => 2005-03-26 00:44:41 [hometext] => ...a relationship without you is not that strong... [bodytext] => The night was dull; no stars could be seen
And there my heart lay in between,
Estranged in darkness; a small cry of plea
Such a curse that resisted me to be free.

Spirits entwining the passion of love
Sends peace by freeing a white dove,
My life carried away by the breeze
My soul left to sail on open seas.

Sinking into waters filled with blood
Creating entities of flash floods,
No one to catch me as I drown
Unbearable pain that brings me down.

Stabs of memories that cause such pain
My heart smudged with a permanent stain,
No washing liquid can ever take away
What my heart couldn’t come to say.

Tears reflected onto pools of fire
Flames that burn with no desire,
Predators await; constantly circling around
Suicidal emotions running the ground.

Reflections mirrored onto walls of ice
The luck of the draw lies on the dice,
But no number can ever repair
What left my soul alone and bare.

Tempest winds that blow with fear
A thousand wounds my body does sear,
Each one hurts so bad every day
All were born the day you went away.

Bonds of steel that now are broken
Aimless insults; now words are outspoken,
Guilt reflected in both our eyes
Truth concealed in a pack of lies.

Stranded here I am on a small island
Every road that I take leads to a dead-end,
Your words that constantly burn my heart
Your face that tears my soul apart.

And every day, my eyes yearn for you
I’ll try to stick our love together with glue,
But I’m sorry if it doesn’t last that long
A relationship without you is not that strong.

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Drowning In Your Love

Contributed by white_tiger on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 12:44:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The night was dull; no stars could be seen
And there my heart lay in between,
Estranged in darkness; a small cry of plea
Such a curse that resisted me to be free.

Spirits entwining the passion of love
Sends peace by freeing a white dove,
My life carried away by the breeze
My soul left to sail on open seas.

Sinking into waters filled with blood
Creating entities of flash floods,
No one to catch me as I drown
Unbearable pain that brings me down.

Stabs of memories that cause such pain
My heart smudged with a permanent stain,
No washing liquid can ever take away
What my heart couldn’t come to say.

Tears reflected onto pools of fire
Flames that burn with no desire,
Predators await; constantly circling around
Suicidal emotions running the ground.

Reflections mirrored onto walls of ice
The luck of the draw lies on the dice,
But no number can ever repair
What left my soul alone and bare.

Tempest winds that blow with fear
A thousand wounds my body does sear,
Each one hurts so bad every day
All were born the day you went away.

Bonds of steel that now are broken
Aimless insults; now words are outspoken,
Guilt reflected in both our eyes
Truth concealed in a pack of lies.

Stranded here I am on a small island
Every road that I take leads to a dead-end,
Your words that constantly burn my heart
Your face that tears my soul apart.

And every day, my eyes yearn for you
I’ll try to stick our love together with glue,
But I’m sorry if it doesn’t last that long
A relationship without you is not that strong.





Copyright © white_tiger ... [ 2005-03-26 00:44:41]
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Re: Drowning In Your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:56:18 PM AEST
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the tragedy is that pieces like this, that are actually good, get no comments and those who dont deserve to even get a read get comments. this was excellent. an enjoyment to read.




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