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Contributed by
treasure
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:49:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lately, my thoughts have been turned inwardly,
Asking myself what I'm meant to be;
And though most of you is unknown to me,
In you, my answers seem to be.
I did not want or expect to fall,
But you were there, tho' at first, I didn't know it at all.
Breaking down my fake, freakish, superficial wall.
Daring me to bare it all.
& though I've yet to see you or feel your touch,
My desire for you gives me such a rush.
& I never expected to like you so much,
But I want you to be my lover, protector, & crutch.
All my senses you seem to provoke...
The possibility of caring not such a joke.
My chains of self-reservation, now broke,
In you, I suddenly find hope.
Read my words...read them well.
'Cause in them, my heart will tell
That with you my dreams now dwell.
And not being with you NOW, is an emotional hell.
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treasure
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:56:35 PM AEST (User
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wow, you is a very lucky person as this is beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dark_Oleander on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:53:51 AM AEST (User
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This is very well written...I love it. |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST (User
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Great poem, i can relate 100%!! |
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