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losing blood
Contributed by
treasure
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:47:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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losing blood
hallucination
begin to love
...the sweet temptation...
pain i need
and pain i feel
in pain i bleed
...in pain i heal...
thoughts cut
...my bloody knife...
not enough
to take my life
blood i shed
and blood i weep
my heart is dead
my soul asleep...
hush...let me sleep...
let me find my peace
let me cut so very deep
and find my bittersweet release...
losing blood
hallucination
beginning of
...eternal damnation...
Copyright ©
treasure
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2005-03-25 20:47:14]
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Re: losing blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:46:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow, great rhyme scheme! You said so much with so many little words. This really spoke out to me. I loved it. You seem so talented.Keep up the MAGNIFICANT work!
ALINA
I often seem to feel this way too. |
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Re: losing blood
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:58:38 PM AEST
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| dont no what to say...i jus loved it... Babi |
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Re: losing blood
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:55:10 PM AEST
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| I loved the flow of this poem, Its so true... So Damned True. Keep writing! |
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