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The beast with in

Contributed by PommeDeSang3 on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 05:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



A Feverish heat consumed the air

The smell of forest….

Of wilderness….

It curled around me, dancing in the air..

Captivating my senses bringing about the unknown..

Releasing the beast..

Awaking it from it’s deep sleep..

Deliberately it awoke

Oh what a domination!

The feeling of it cascading through me

Such overwhelming power!

A shutter down my spine,

A chill though my body…

Consuming what energy I contained

Overwhelmed by such a force…

By such a beast..

It’s jaws opened letting out a mighty howl

It was awake and ready for a hunt

The metallic smell of blood devoured my senses

The smell of sweet death.

This was waiting to fulfill my lust

Waiting to be release to the world..

The world of the night…..

Incandescent was the moon

Complete, it filled the raven sky..

My beast danced around me revealing to me it’s hunger to be sovereign

The Beast flooded my mind forcing me out….

Forcing its way to the top removing all my will.

Swallowing up my strength..

My bones began to shift,

My teeth turned into fangs,

My hands were no more…

With eyes of gold I stared into the darkness of the night..

Ready for the hunt to begin..

Ready for sweet death to fulfill my lust for blood because…

For now I was no longer human but a beast of pure destruction..

A leader of death…

I was an end to someone’s life.

Mors lupus of the night

With a aghast howl I would bring youu to your death.




Copyright © PommeDeSang3 ... [ 2005-03-25 17:28:41]
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Re: The beast with in (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:57:53 PM AEST
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good


Re: The beast with in (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:57:58 PM AEST
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Re: The beast with in (User Rating: 1 )
by Aaralyn on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:56:18 PM AEST
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I like... I like some of the phrasing and word choices... good work...




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