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Array ( [sid] => 88654 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => “First kiss in Nuts” [time] => 2005-03-24 23:21:08 [hometext] => The words just never seem to come out right .. So I thought I’d write them down for you. [bodytext] => I sit here and I wonder, is it right to feel the way I do?
When everything’s going wrong, there’s always something to remind me of you
And I’m happy again… with that simple reminder

I miss so many things about you
Your smile, your advice, us spending time together…
The way it felt when you seemed to be looking right through me
You could always tell what I was thinking

I’m afraid that these feelings I have for you will never go away
My heart is telling me I need you as a part of my life… up close and personal
And the logical part of me is saying, yes be a part of your life
But from a distance.
Else I’ll be hurt again
It echoes in my mind “history always repeats itself”
And then my heart reminds me … “remember you love him”

I don’t want to hurt you and I don’t want you to do the same
Know this, this is not a game for me…
The space in your heart that I feel I want for myself
I know I can’t have…
It belongs to someone else, it always will…

“In what way can I have you?” I wonder everyday
Sometimes I wish things could be my way, and then sometimes, I’m glad they aren’t
Because I’m not sure you would’ve been very happy… with me

I want you as a part of my life
This I know for sure
But I don’t know which role is right for you
And how I’d fit into yours… your life I mean

I know given the chance I could make you very happy
But I’m not sure I would be the same
I don’t know if I could be
Just “someone” to you, without the “that special” before it
You know what I mean…?

Know that no matter how things turn out,
What happens or where our lives may take us,
I will always be one person you can say truly loves you…
Even if it’s from a distance.



21.03.05

“First kiss in Nuts”
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“First kiss in Nuts”

Contributed by Marisa_A_Sydney on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I sit here and I wonder, is it right to feel the way I do?
When everything’s going wrong, there’s always something to remind me of you
And I’m happy again… with that simple reminder

I miss so many things about you
Your smile, your advice, us spending time together…
The way it felt when you seemed to be looking right through me
You could always tell what I was thinking

I’m afraid that these feelings I have for you will never go away
My heart is telling me I need you as a part of my life… up close and personal
And the logical part of me is saying, yes be a part of your life
But from a distance.
Else I’ll be hurt again
It echoes in my mind “history always repeats itself”
And then my heart reminds me … “remember you love him”

I don’t want to hurt you and I don’t want you to do the same
Know this, this is not a game for me…
The space in your heart that I feel I want for myself
I know I can’t have…
It belongs to someone else, it always will…

“In what way can I have you?” I wonder everyday
Sometimes I wish things could be my way, and then sometimes, I’m glad they aren’t
Because I’m not sure you would’ve been very happy… with me

I want you as a part of my life
This I know for sure
But I don’t know which role is right for you
And how I’d fit into yours… your life I mean

I know given the chance I could make you very happy
But I’m not sure I would be the same
I don’t know if I could be
Just “someone” to you, without the “that special” before it
You know what I mean…?

Know that no matter how things turn out,
What happens or where our lives may take us,
I will always be one person you can say truly loves you…
Even if it’s from a distance.



21.03.05

“First kiss in Nuts”




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Re: “First kiss in Nuts” (User Rating: 1 )
by treasure on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:50:42 PM AEST
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i love this...is drips with love, fear, longing. i've been there. i soooo know how this feels. great write.


Re: “First kiss in Nuts” (User Rating: 1 )
by CheReid on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:50:58 PM AEST
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Aww.... this is really beautiful.....
Love you.
Me.


Re: “First kiss in Nuts” (User Rating: 1 )
by kitkat on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 12:23:55 AM AEST
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I know how u feel. i can relate


Re: “First kiss in Nuts” (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:04:44 AM AEST
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Oh man. This made me all warm inside. It's so beautiful. I really hope the person who inspired this knows how you feel! :-)


Re: “First kiss in Nuts” (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:05:37 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Very well spoken. I heard it loud and clear lol. I have been in this situation one too many times. Still doesn't make sense to this day. But you know you can't help but wonder "what if"? What if i tried harder? Would it have made a diffrence? What if i showed more affection? Would he of noticed? The truth is, we can't question ourselves with "what if's" We just have to face "what is" Great write. Much love.

~Alucia~




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