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Array ( [sid] => 88629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Dont Even Care [time] => 2005-03-24 18:29:52 [hometext] => this poem i wrote about my boyfriend cause for like 3 days he didnt want to talk hardly and i was in despair cause i really love him [bodytext] => You never phone
I feel like Im in this alone
Its like you dont even care
All this I cannot bare
I will always love you this I swear
But do you even feel the same way?
Because I cant go on another day
With you is where I belong
I hope nothing will ever go wrong
Because I love you
I know this in my heart so true
But its like you cant stand me
If its true then dont let it be
Just tell me,Cause you'll hurt me even more
Because I fall even more in love with you
I would drop anything or what i've ever held on to
Just to be with you
If you dont I dont think I will be able to move on,go on another day
Because I really love you I dont want to to ever go away
Its like you dont even care [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

You Dont Even Care

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You never phone
I feel like Im in this alone
Its like you dont even care
All this I cannot bare
I will always love you this I swear
But do you even feel the same way?
Because I cant go on another day
With you is where I belong
I hope nothing will ever go wrong
Because I love you
I know this in my heart so true
But its like you cant stand me
If its true then dont let it be
Just tell me,Cause you'll hurt me even more
Because I fall even more in love with you
I would drop anything or what i've ever held on to
Just to be with you
If you dont I dont think I will be able to move on,go on another day
Because I really love you I dont want to to ever go away
Its like you dont even care

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-03-24 18:29:52]
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Re: You Dont Even Care (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:23:10 PM AEST
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What an emotional write. Hopefully things have balanced out since you wrote this, and it seemed to just have flown out. It was really strong the way you asked quetsions and said how you felt without mincing words. Good stuff.

Re: You Dont Even Care (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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i love the flow
sad poem really
but i love it none the less
-->Rae

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