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Array ( [sid] => 88591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oceans Apart [time] => 2005-03-24 13:20:33 [hometext] => This submission is true [bodytext] => I talked to this girl and gave her all I had to offer,
I bought her candy-wrote poems and taped a rose to her locker,
listened to everything she said-just to hear her voice,
I would imagine her as a goddess-my Helen of Troy,
I would stare into her eyes and get lost in the abyss,
often my heart was cold-but with this girl it would submit,
never a day would go by without me thinking of her beauty,
and through the glare of my eyes-my thoughts were protruding,
always with a smile when we talked-I felt an unforgetable moment,
I think of her every night-but we are separated by oceans,
wondering why fate has to make love so impossible,
my love just builds up to the point of being phenomenal,
but being away for so long made me realize love is hard,
I guess its true...
the sound of goodbye is louder than a breaking heart... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dvsnme816 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Oceans Apart

Contributed by dvsnme816 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:20:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I talked to this girl and gave her all I had to offer,
I bought her candy-wrote poems and taped a rose to her locker,
listened to everything she said-just to hear her voice,
I would imagine her as a goddess-my Helen of Troy,
I would stare into her eyes and get lost in the abyss,
often my heart was cold-but with this girl it would submit,
never a day would go by without me thinking of her beauty,
and through the glare of my eyes-my thoughts were protruding,
always with a smile when we talked-I felt an unforgetable moment,
I think of her every night-but we are separated by oceans,
wondering why fate has to make love so impossible,
my love just builds up to the point of being phenomenal,
but being away for so long made me realize love is hard,
I guess its true...
the sound of goodbye is louder than a breaking heart...

Copyright © dvsnme816 ... [ 2005-03-24 13:20:33]
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Re: Oceans Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:06:06 AM AEST
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Alex, this is such a heart touching poem.
It touched the very depths of my heart, but on the other hand it's filled with sorrow. I'm so sorry that the one to make u happy is ocean's apart.
You've became one of my favourite writer's on this site. Ur work is so unique and so divine.
Hope everything works out for u my dear friend. Take care.
Hugs,
Sue

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