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The blood i've bled
The screams i've shouted
The hopes i've dubted

All these I've done
Their what i've become
I thrieve on the pain
I live off the shame

The knife always leaves scares
But to me their beauty marks
I try to back away
But I love the feel of the blade

It's my turn to die
My death is suicide
But no one really cares
So I won't bother to say good-bye [comments] => 7 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 72 [informant] => CrippinBabi513 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

I Wanna Die

Contributed by CrippinBabi513 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:44:20 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

The tears i've shed
The blood i've bled
The screams i've shouted
The hopes i've dubted

All these I've done
Their what i've become
I thrieve on the pain
I live off the shame

The knife always leaves scares
But to me their beauty marks
I try to back away
But I love the feel of the blade

It's my turn to die
My death is suicide
But no one really cares
So I won't bother to say good-bye

Copyright © CrippinBabi513 ... [ 2005-03-24 12:44:20]
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Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:53:00 PM AEST
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It's good this is just writing, and not real.
Only problem with this is a couple of this spelt wrong. 'Doubted' and 'They're'

Great write otherwise.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:16:50 PM AEST
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good writing...
i always write those kind of thing too but i love my life also...its really cool how u can feel how other people feel just for that second your writing it

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:28:14 PM AEST
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great poem, emotional..i like your style with this one it's cool, keep up the great work.

~Kay-Kay

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:54:06 PM AEST
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"The knife always leaves scars
But to me they're beauty marks"
- beautiful lines

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:08:52 PM AEST
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well I hope this is just writing because I can
relate to these feelings quite a bit. I liked how
it was written simply yet with such feeling.
Keep up the writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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There were somestrong lines here. I think you were able to include your reader in your sadness.

Nice job.
mj

Re: I Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:02:34 PM AEST
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nice write,we all live with battle scars,but those scars represents stories,and this story was well told

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