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[aid] => mick
[title] => I'm Just A Girl
[time] => 2005-03-24 11:20:48
[hometext] => Please Comment, this is my first time sharing my poetry... thanks
[bodytext] => I知 just a girl trying to stay alive,
A girl desperate to survive.
I知 just a confused girl, full of hate,
Whose answers came way too late.
I知 just a junky, stoned out of her mind,
Searching for the hope she cannot find.
I知 just a scarred girl, whose been betrayed,
Whose heart is torn and frayed.
I知 just a girl whose afraid of the day ahead,
That girl who trembles from the things you致e said.
I知 just a girl who bleeds her pain away,
A girl who can find no better way.
I知 just a girl who feels empty inside,
Whose tears she cannot hide.
I知 just a girl who wants to be loved,
Who wants encouragement from up above.
A girl who wants to end the pain,
She cannot see the sun through the rain.
I知 just another statistic, labeled under a chart
Suicidal is the column I知 apart.
Kate Ecklund
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[informant] => suicidal_imbecile
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[alanguage] => english
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[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
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I'm Just A Girl
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:20:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I知 just a girl trying to stay alive,
A girl desperate to survive.
I知 just a confused girl, full of hate,
Whose answers came way too late.
I知 just a junky, stoned out of her mind,
Searching for the hope she cannot find.
I知 just a scarred girl, whose been betrayed,
Whose heart is torn and frayed.
I知 just a girl whose afraid of the day ahead,
That girl who trembles from the things you致e said.
I知 just a girl who bleeds her pain away,
A girl who can find no better way.
I知 just a girl who feels empty inside,
Whose tears she cannot hide.
I知 just a girl who wants to be loved,
Who wants encouragement from up above.
A girl who wants to end the pain,
She cannot see the sun through the rain.
I知 just another statistic, labeled under a chart
Suicidal is the column I知 apart.
Kate Ecklund
Copyright ﾂｩ
suicidal_imbecile
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2005-03-24 11:20:48]
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:14:59 PM AEST
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This was very nice 2 read stated very well and a nice flow well done, and welcome 2 ypdc . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:19:20 PM AEST
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| Kate why don't you become the girl you love, the girl that fights back, the girl with dreams, the girl that isn't just another statistic, the girl that makes a statement with life, the girl that won't quit, the girl that won't let this harsh world take control, the girl that gets some counseling. It was a great write. I thought you expressed yourself so well that it caused all this worry to come bounding out of me. Keep writing. Love yourself sister. It HAS to start there, Much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:00:29 PM AEST
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You did express yourself well in this.
And trust me, things can change. I can relate to some of this, not all, but some of it. So I know.
Fab write, well done, and welcome to YPDC.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by enamat on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:14:13 PM AEST
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| I agree with a previous comment. it's a very nice writting, you have a talent and you should use it to express yourself . see beaty in little things. writting poetry is just one of the reasons you should feel good about yourself. |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by SimplyMe on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:31:16 PM AEST
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That was very well stated. I often feel this way. I know a lot of people do. I hope things get better in time. Welcome to YPDC hope you enjoy your stay. Much love.
P.S if you ever need to talk just Pm me.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by Elayner27 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:46:23 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. The lines are so true and I can relate. Also they are short, and not complicated. Also I love the rhyme. Every single stanza is so meaningful and so true. I love it so much! Awesome write. |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by allforyou on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:46:18 PM AEST
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"I知 just a confused girl, full of hate,
Whose answers came way too late."
I can relate to that part. I loved this one. I hope you decide to continue contributing to the site. I look forward to your next.
--Kara |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by sride686 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:25:27 PM AEST
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Let me just say damn girl this poem hit me hard. well done it left me thinking I like this line at the end.
A girl who wants to end the pain,
She cannot see the sun through the rain
Thank you for your words.....Steve |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:15:06 PM AEST
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suicidal imbecile
Good poem
All of us struggle and you pointed your struggles very well "This is a part of what life is about 'good against evil'
Again nice write
Sinned |
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Re: I'm Just A Girl
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by scotsgirl on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:27:30 PM AEST
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| beautiful my kate... you have a great gift and im glad you are sharing it with the world. remember that i know how you feel and im always here for you. |
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