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Array ( [sid] => 88554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i dont belong here [time] => 2005-03-24 04:05:35 [hometext] => i feel really lost sometimes and this is one of them moments [bodytext] => painful reminders linger around my caffeinated existence.
that is not an existence at all.
I'm dying here,
This world was never meant for me.

sometimes i feel so unattached
ill be in a crowded room
and i will just stop and whisper
i am alone....

I feel like such a loser, I could pull strings of my sorrow's
From every aching joint in my body.
forming together a gossamer web of regrets that would say,
"I'm sorry, but I just don't like you that way."

If I were smart, each breath would be taken slowly,
for the weight of loneliness slowly crushes my chest
But I'm swallowing air as quickly as I swallow the
caffeinated liquid from the bottle at my lips

drowning in a world that isen't mine
i pass from mind, as i pass from sight
giving up on the happiness i was promised to find
just a shadow in a crowded room
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i dont belong here

Contributed by socialmisfit on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:05:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



painful reminders linger around my caffeinated existence.
that is not an existence at all.
I'm dying here,
This world was never meant for me.

sometimes i feel so unattached
ill be in a crowded room
and i will just stop and whisper
i am alone....

I feel like such a loser, I could pull strings of my sorrow's
From every aching joint in my body.
forming together a gossamer web of regrets that would say,
"I'm sorry, but I just don't like you that way."

If I were smart, each breath would be taken slowly,
for the weight of loneliness slowly crushes my chest
But I'm swallowing air as quickly as I swallow the
caffeinated liquid from the bottle at my lips

drowning in a world that isen't mine
i pass from mind, as i pass from sight
giving up on the happiness i was promised to find
just a shadow in a crowded room




Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-03-24 04:05:35]
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Re: i dont belong here (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:46:50 AM AEST
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An awsome write...
I liked how you worded...from every aching joint in my body...
forming together a gossamer web of regrets that would say...
I'm sorry, but I just don't like you that way...

I too feel like that sometimes....regrets are tiring..
that last line was so final...hope you will find happiness with other shadows!~
cheers!~


Re: i dont belong here (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:21:30 PM AEST
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I only ever regret the things I never said or done. Some things must be avoided to regret, whilst others must be done to regret them . . .

Saying that - its only my perspective. Here's hoping you find something that causes you to write away from these feelings.

Keep writing, SM.




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