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a cigarette burn
jolting me back to reality
seering my nerves
but soon to be a scar
you will fade
I will heal

"I know I am too good for you, but will never be good enough for anyone else" [comments] => 5 [counter] => 530 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Light my Ciggarette

Contributed by Rxqueen on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:57:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You
a cigarette burn
jolting me back to reality
seering my nerves
but soon to be a scar
you will fade
I will heal

"I know I am too good for you, but will never be good enough for anyone else"

Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2005-03-24 02:57:27]
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Re: Light my Ciggarette (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:54:12 AM AEST
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Ouch! Hope you're okay Jocie. Cute, and good write.

Re: Light my Ciggarette (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:29:25 AM AEST
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This is poem has every thing and gives new

meaning 2 the phrase, in a phrase, lol i liked

it deffinately 2 the point and well stated very

nice . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Light my Ciggarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:17:48 AM AEST
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I liked the unlying tone in this...
Nice write
Jenni

Re: Light my Ciggarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:24:11 PM AEST
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The burn will heal, fade to a scar
But you will always be a star !!!

If scars help to build character ... I got more character than I need. Hope your OK and if you are gonna smoke after ___, get up outta bed so ya don't fall asleep next time ... LOL

Nazzy ~
( who needs more fingers to count how many times he's done that )

Re: Light my Ciggarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:28:05 AM AEST
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I don't know too much about cigarette burns... but I do know some people who really seer my nerves. I think I can apply this to the world, and only hope that after I run them over the cops won't catch me...

The last line though has such an oppressive tone. Sad and Lonely, I healin' but no better. Hmmm.

Aq.

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