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Array ( [sid] => 88532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Do I know [time] => 2005-03-23 23:25:43 [hometext] => This poem I wrote is about my boyfriend and I, He lives pretty far away from me and i feel as if our relationship is falling apart. I love him so much and were are trying so hard to keep our relationship strong but he doesnt call me back or anything . [bodytext] => It seems to me were falling apart,
It seems to me your breaking my heart,
It seems to me you dont care anymore,
I start to think what I waste my time for?

It seems to me were losing it all,
It seems to me were going to fall,
It seems to me I feel I wanna die,
And everything you said could have been a lie.

As I start to think and feel this way,
All I ever wanted was for you to stay,
Stay in my heart, my mind, and sould,
It seems to me thats when I feel whole.

When I think, sleep, and dream of you,
That's when I know this whole thing is true,
All these nights I sit up and cry,
Hoping what we have isn't just a lie.

Hoping that everything you say is true,
And if it isn't imagine what it would do,
If you can't understand how I feel,
How could this whole thing be real?

As I have told you once before,
There is no one else I could ever care for more,
Everything I have said has been true,
Because I said I would never lie to you.

I don't know what else I can say,
I don't even know why I feel this way,
Maybe it seems were drifting apart,
And I feel like I am losing my heart.

Why does it always have to be me?
Open your eyes, why can't you see,
You know that I was good to you,
But how do I know if this whole thing is true.


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Chellcey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
How Do I know

Contributed by Chellcey on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It seems to me were falling apart,
It seems to me your breaking my heart,
It seems to me you dont care anymore,
I start to think what I waste my time for?

It seems to me were losing it all,
It seems to me were going to fall,
It seems to me I feel I wanna die,
And everything you said could have been a lie.

As I start to think and feel this way,
All I ever wanted was for you to stay,
Stay in my heart, my mind, and sould,
It seems to me thats when I feel whole.

When I think, sleep, and dream of you,
That's when I know this whole thing is true,
All these nights I sit up and cry,
Hoping what we have isn't just a lie.

Hoping that everything you say is true,
And if it isn't imagine what it would do,
If you can't understand how I feel,
How could this whole thing be real?

As I have told you once before,
There is no one else I could ever care for more,
Everything I have said has been true,
Because I said I would never lie to you.

I don't know what else I can say,
I don't even know why I feel this way,
Maybe it seems were drifting apart,
And I feel like I am losing my heart.

Why does it always have to be me?
Open your eyes, why can't you see,
You know that I was good to you,
But how do I know if this whole thing is true.






Copyright © Chellcey ... [ 2005-03-23 23:25:43]
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Re: How Do I know (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:31:19 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: How Do I know (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:45:14 AM AEST
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PARDON ME FOR SAYING,YOU CAN'T BE LOSING YOUR HEART-SIMPLY BECAUSE IF YOU WERE,YOU COULD OF NEVER HAVE WROTE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL & HEART FELT POEM! IF HE DOESN'T CALL YOU BACK,THEN IT'S GONNA BE A LOVE LOST FOR HIM!!

DAN!!!




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