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Array ( [sid] => 88523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don’t You See What You’re Doing? [time] => 2005-03-23 21:04:38 [hometext] => I wrote this about my mom. Comments n Rating pls! [bodytext] => 7:44 PM
3/23/2005

You don’t even see what you’re doing to me
You’re too blind to notice what is going on
Some how I wish I could make you disappear
You make me cry.
Making me feel like I should die
I can’t take anymore of your pain
Tears are streaming burning down my face
If you think you know me well – you’re wrong.
You have turned up your anger
Lashing it out toward your family
Did you know I snapped myself with a rubber band?
Holding back from slicing up my scaring skin
No you wouldn’t know until it comes too late.
You yell and *****
You grumble and groan
No way is there peace I’ll see tonight
Compromising with you is difficult some how.
I don’t know if I love you
I’m not sure I should care
How come you do this to me it just isn’t fair
You eat up my self-esteem.
You smash my hopes, my dreams
You ripe out my heart destroying its strength
Day time gets harder to be around you
Night time surrounds me in demons with death
I get scared of you its hard to take a breath.
You don’t see me I’m falling apart in front of you
You won’t understand my reason’s sometimes I don’t like you
I hide it all from you behind my clothes and soul.

© Care Strom [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => KishaLovesCare126 [notes] => Mod 9 bleep word 3/23/05 Please bleep the whole word and make it easier for moderators. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Don’t You See What You’re Doing?

Contributed by KishaLovesCare126 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



7:44 PM
3/23/2005

You don’t even see what you’re doing to me
You’re too blind to notice what is going on
Some how I wish I could make you disappear
You make me cry.
Making me feel like I should die
I can’t take anymore of your pain
Tears are streaming burning down my face
If you think you know me well – you’re wrong.
You have turned up your anger
Lashing it out toward your family
Did you know I snapped myself with a rubber band?
Holding back from slicing up my scaring skin
No you wouldn’t know until it comes too late.
You yell and *****
You grumble and groan
No way is there peace I’ll see tonight
Compromising with you is difficult some how.
I don’t know if I love you
I’m not sure I should care
How come you do this to me it just isn’t fair
You eat up my self-esteem.
You smash my hopes, my dreams
You ripe out my heart destroying its strength
Day time gets harder to be around you
Night time surrounds me in demons with death
I get scared of you its hard to take a breath.
You don’t see me I’m falling apart in front of you
You won’t understand my reason’s sometimes I don’t like you
I hide it all from you behind my clothes and soul.

© Care Strom




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Re: Don’t You See What You’re Doing? (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:29:09 PM AEST
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wow I have a poem like this about my mom.
i can't post it because it isn't appropriate.
But I know what you're going through.
Great Write :-D

~Brenna~


Re: Don’t You See What You’re Doing? (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthann on Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 07:49:01 AM AEST
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i know my own just doesnt get it, i am a nothing your poem is so beautiful, someone understands thanks




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