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Array ( [sid] => 88520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish [time] => 2005-03-23 20:57:10 [hometext] => this was before i had a boyfriend now i love him so much i hopw u like this one [bodytext] => I wish I had someone to love
Someone to cherish and always think of
I wish I had someone to put up with me
someone that will set my soul free
I wish I had someone who understands
someone whos strong and sticks they're lands
I want that day to come
Before I get comfortably numb
what if i will never love
no one to cherish or think of
what if i never have no one to put up with me
no one that will set me soul free
But i gotta think confident and straight
everyone finds some its the true fate
love...true love i belive
no longer...no longer i promise i wont deceive [comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I Wish

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:57:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I wish I had someone to love
Someone to cherish and always think of
I wish I had someone to put up with me
someone that will set my soul free
I wish I had someone who understands
someone whos strong and sticks they're lands
I want that day to come
Before I get comfortably numb
what if i will never love
no one to cherish or think of
what if i never have no one to put up with me
no one that will set me soul free
But i gotta think confident and straight
everyone finds some its the true fate
love...true love i belive
no longer...no longer i promise i wont deceive




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Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by nabokovfan87 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:41:22 PM AEST
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nice write two poems in one kinda. line six seems a little wierd thought. anyways nice attempt


Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Hey I agree... nice write. Line 6 does seem a lil werid. Never heard of that b4. All in all... a very good poem.
~Donna~


Re: I Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:33:59 AM AEST
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yeah good job, nice rhyme schemes. u definitely shouldn't have rushed line 6 though, it sticsk out like a sore thumb!




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