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[title] => A Baby's Cry
[time] => 2005-03-23 20:48:42
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[bodytext] => A Baby's Cry
You took away the reason I was living
And made me suffer each moment I was breathing.
You took away the only thing I ever needed
And made my soul cease in being.
The bliss once had is forgotten with pain,
And the sun doesn't shine through the incessant rain.
Not even numbness can make this pain fade,
Because you took my reason for living away.
I can't go on wishing a second more
About my baby that's dead, evermore.
I can't endure this Hell anymore
When God took the reason I lived for.
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A Baby's Cry
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essentially9
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:48:42 PM in AEST
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A Baby's Cry
You took away the reason I was living
And made me suffer each moment I was breathing.
You took away the only thing I ever needed
And made my soul cease in being.
The bliss once had is forgotten with pain,
And the sun doesn't shine through the incessant rain.
Not even numbness can make this pain fade,
Because you took my reason for living away.
I can't go on wishing a second more
About my baby that's dead, evermore.
I can't endure this Hell anymore
When God took the reason I lived for.
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-03-23 20:48:42]
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by greeneyes on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:24:52 PM AEST
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This pain is very deep.
Nancy |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:25:04 PM AEST
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| Strong write and very well expressed. |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:06:18 PM AEST
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Very strong write. Bringing a life into this world is a joy like no other. When that life is taken away, the loss is beyond belief. No earthly words can help deal with the pain. Know that there are people who care and will help in anyway they can.
The Voice
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:32:03 PM AEST
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Good poem there. I don't know if you were
talking about something that actually
happened or not, but I can defintely relate to
the 1st line in the last stanza. I thought this
was written very beautifully.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by white_tiger on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:55:53 AM AEST
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great poem!!! i know the pain when you lose a baby. my friend was pregnant when she was only 15 years old and she lost the baby as well, becasue her parents made her have an abortion. loved the descriptive words, expecially 2nd para.
huggs and keep smiling
roopa |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:10:51 AM AEST
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I see your pain is so sad and deep.
Very awsome writing.well done |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:46:30 AM AEST
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| Wow, powerful. I got chills, literally chills from reading this. I don't know what else to say. Amazing! SImply amazing. I felt the ache, the pain the agony. And the truth behind those words is one of the greatest in all of life. Loves it! |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:59:10 PM AEST
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A very moving and emotional write. As tragic as the loss of a baby would be, our reason for being is He. Lean on Him in time of need, and certainly feel free to reach out to others, including me!
Willofree, If we are not afraid to cry we can grieve. If we can grieve, we can heal. |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:00:04 PM AEST
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Wow Jen...this is so sad...
It is chilling, too.
I really really hope this is not true, Jen, but if it is, I am sorry.
Fantastic write, hun. I can't say anything I would change.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:13:03 AM AEST
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Grafic I hope this isn't for real.To lose a child is terrible,but in time we see a new angel is born.He sees God face to face.Filled with heavenly grace to help lead his family to that better place.
Sinned |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:57:45 AM AEST
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| Ooh..it is soo sad and heart wrenching..my heart moves with this cry..peace and love Jenni..:-) venkat |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:41:32 PM AEST
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*Tears*
Moving write..
Jenni |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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The feelings behind this are so sad.
Very painful piece. |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:01:49 PM AEST
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| Wow, what a sad poem |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:37:20 PM AEST
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| I saw the reads on this one at 99 and I just told myself i *had* to be the 100th reader :P, but all joking aside, I truly believe without a doubt that this is the best piece of writing I have ever read from you. It was so captivating, and it was so tragic, it was really something to behold. I can only hope you're not writing from experience here, because i truly feel for anyone who has to endure the kind of situation you've depicted here. It was just a beautfully done piece of work, I am just so impressed by it. Just...amazing! |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by jjones12 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:27:37 PM AEST
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...........i'm speechless.........great write.
=Jen= |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:23:02 PM AEST
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| So sad so painfull A beautiful write |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by car21221 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 11:43:13 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem so heartbreaking |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by ek_da_poet on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:28:04 PM AEST
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| holy crap, this was really good well writtin keep it up pe@ce |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by rapnificent on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed these verses from a poet whose character emantes the boldness of a realist in reflection. |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by candysears on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:35:00 PM AEST
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Very nice write..Sad..But good poem..
God Bless! |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:27:44 PM AEST
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What a sad poem, thanks for sharing.
Keep writting.
Peace be with you. |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by ruthann on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 07:41:42 AM AEST
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| i am so sorry for your pain only a mother of a child can really understand |
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Re: A Baby's Cry
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 08:14:42 AM AEST
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a very deep suffering. expressed so well.
a very good piece of writing. thanks. |
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