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Array ( [sid] => 88503 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Unknown World In the Sky [time] => 2005-03-23 18:34:24 [hometext] => This is to my Grandfather. I was sorta rushed to write this so, it's not one of my best. But it still has meaning. [bodytext] => I can just see you now walking along the puffy white clouds
Spreading your beautiful wings and soaring proud
Walking around Heaven with your head held high
Celebrating your victory because you made it to the unknown world in the sky

You made it to the place where all suffering ends
The world where we'll all meet again
There is no need to ask why
Every question has it's own allaby
Because it's the unknown world in the sky

Fear is not an issue because you know you have full protection
Everything is just right but still not quite perfection
There is no need for tears dear Grandfather so don't you cry
Be happy on the unknown world in the sky

Don't be sad dear Grandfather be free
Smile as you look down to watch over me

I know this is goodbye
So i will not ask why
Just fly dear Gradnfather fly
For i know one day i will find you on the unknown world in the sky
Goodbye dear Gradnfather, Goodbye


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The Unknown World In the Sky

Contributed by SimplyMe on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:34:24 PM in AEST
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I can just see you now walking along the puffy white clouds
Spreading your beautiful wings and soaring proud
Walking around Heaven with your head held high
Celebrating your victory because you made it to the unknown world in the sky

You made it to the place where all suffering ends
The world where we'll all meet again
There is no need to ask why
Every question has it's own allaby
Because it's the unknown world in the sky

Fear is not an issue because you know you have full protection
Everything is just right but still not quite perfection
There is no need for tears dear Grandfather so don't you cry
Be happy on the unknown world in the sky

Don't be sad dear Grandfather be free
Smile as you look down to watch over me

I know this is goodbye
So i will not ask why
Just fly dear Gradnfather fly
For i know one day i will find you on the unknown world in the sky
Goodbye dear Gradnfather, Goodbye






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Re: The Unknown World In the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:46:51 PM AEST
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this is simply beautiful no pun intended brought me 2 tears reading it, your a wonderful writter and a beautiful human being . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: The Unknown World In the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:20:32 AM AEST
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This is a beautifully written poem so beautifully expressed. I'm so sorry for the loss of ur grand father, but like u said he'll be watching over u from heaven. Much peace to u dear friend. A truly heart warming write. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue


Re: The Unknown World In the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:39:59 AM AEST
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This made me teary eyed. Gorgeous write. You're so talented when it comes to putting your feelings on paper.


Re: The Unknown World In the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:30:06 PM AEST
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This reduced me to tears. How I can relate to this one. I miss my grandpa so much and I can relate to the pain and loss you feel.

A beautiful poem

Love Angelxxxxx




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