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Array ( [sid] => 88502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With You [time] => 2005-03-23 18:31:42 [hometext] => This is another love poem I wrote for my boyfriend. [bodytext] => I hear your name
I picture your face
I long to embrace your delicate skeletal frame
Your rhythmic walk has grace
I hear your voice
I’m drawn in your dazzling eyes
Is when my insides rejoice
Whenever I see you, my heart flies
I can’t imagine life without you
You’ve shown me trust and compassion
My would tear in two
Without your passion
Your smile can brighten a room
Your laughter wakes the sun
They scare away the gloom
With you, I have the most fun
I forget my problems and worries
They’re drawn out into space
It feels my heart is soaring
As I examine your beautiful face
You’ve always been there for me
I’m glad to help you escape pain
I want to be with you for all eternity
I never want you to complain [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 2 [informant] => smiley_jennyxoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

With You

Contributed by smiley_jennyxoxo on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I hear your name
I picture your face
I long to embrace your delicate skeletal frame
Your rhythmic walk has grace
I hear your voice
I’m drawn in your dazzling eyes
Is when my insides rejoice
Whenever I see you, my heart flies
I can’t imagine life without you
You’ve shown me trust and compassion
My would tear in two
Without your passion
Your smile can brighten a room
Your laughter wakes the sun
They scare away the gloom
With you, I have the most fun
I forget my problems and worries
They’re drawn out into space
It feels my heart is soaring
As I examine your beautiful face
You’ve always been there for me
I’m glad to help you escape pain
I want to be with you for all eternity
I never want you to complain

Copyright Â© smiley_jennyxoxo ... [ 2005-03-23 18:31:42]
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Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by TUNE on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:49:31 PM AEST
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ya poem was nice u seem like u really like ya boyfriend thats kool keep up da writing ~1~
Tun3

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by TUNE on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:49:32 PM AEST
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ya poem was nice u seem like u really like ya boyfriend thats kool keep up da writing ~1~
Tun3

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:55:12 AM AEST
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YOUR MAN IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE SOMEONE SO NICE! GREAT POEM TOO!!

DAN!!!

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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Hey everyone, thank you so much for the nice comments. i love hearing them! I just wanted to mention that i realize i accidently omitted a word from my poem. The word 'heart' is supposed to be in between the words 'my' and 'would' of my poem. My poem seems to make no sense without that word in there. ~*Jenny*~

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