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Array ( [sid] => 88438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => good bye mother [time] => 2005-03-23 06:04:57 [hometext] => this is for my birth mother but no longer my mum. [bodytext] => you will not listen to me your daughter

the carrier of your genes, your fruitation

so to him all women's knees part eh?

what am i? your baby? your competition?

wake up mother, he raped your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

am i a sacrifice for family? for you?

"keep your mouth shut" is all i hear

well i feel gagged and isolated too.

wake up mother, he killed your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

you don't know or care how i feel

siblings worried that it will turn bitter

so im the one left out of the circle

wake up mother,i am also your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

i didn't ask for it, i didn't want it

i didn't want you to die either

i didn't want the family to split

wake up mother,i am your baby daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

am i supposed to listen to you?

"i love you " makes it better?

cuddles makes me scream too

wake up mother,i am no longer your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

"ask god's forgiveness for your part"

well excuse me whilst i falter

talk about daggers to the heart

wake up mother, i am no longer your daughter


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good bye mother

Contributed by hrpuffnstuff on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:04:57 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



you will not listen to me your daughter

the carrier of your genes, your fruitation

so to him all women's knees part eh?

what am i? your baby? your competition?

wake up mother, he raped your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

am i a sacrifice for family? for you?

"keep your mouth shut" is all i hear

well i feel gagged and isolated too.

wake up mother, he killed your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

you don't know or care how i feel

siblings worried that it will turn bitter

so im the one left out of the circle

wake up mother,i am also your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

i didn't ask for it, i didn't want it

i didn't want you to die either

i didn't want the family to split

wake up mother,i am your baby daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

am i supposed to listen to you?

"i love you " makes it better?

cuddles makes me scream too

wake up mother,i am no longer your daughter



you will not listen to me your daughter

"ask god's forgiveness for your part"

well excuse me whilst i falter

talk about daggers to the heart

wake up mother, i am no longer your daughter






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Re: good bye mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:12:56 AM AEST
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Deep and powerful.. very tragic write...
Jenni


Re: good bye mother (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:51:03 AM AEST
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I can feel the hurt...
take care...hrpuffnstuff...cheers!~


Re: good bye mother (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:11:53 AM AEST
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wow Hayley *hugs* that was so deep and powerful, hope you feel better for getting that off your chest . very good write, expressed deeply
pix xx


Re: good bye mother (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:41:43 PM AEST
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Hayley, this is a sad, emotional and heart breaking write. I felt ur pain in ur words and sensed the anguish and the anger that u suffer. Much peace to u dear friend. A true master piece with the essence of sadness attached to it.
Hugs,
Sue




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