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pierce through my skin
blood like the velvet
that drapes your pale skin

crying your ocean
of corpse and decay
rip out my insides
put them out to lay

rip off my flesh
desecrate my soul
remind me off my punishment
let the pain flow

my desreving desires
for pain and distrust
hurt me like nightmares
ashes bring my dust

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Hollow

Contributed by desecratedtears on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

dark nails of pain
pierce through my skin
blood like the velvet
that drapes your pale skin

crying your ocean
of corpse and decay
rip out my insides
put them out to lay

rip off my flesh
desecrate my soul
remind me off my punishment
let the pain flow

my desreving desires
for pain and distrust
hurt me like nightmares
ashes bring my dust

Copyright © desecratedtears ... [ 2005-03-22 23:13:43]
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Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:23:20 PM AEST
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Welcome to this wonderful site. I enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Very dark and thought provoking. I really liked it. I look forward to reading many more of your writes. So keep it up! :-)

Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:38:31 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC!!!...this is a great poem...and i cant wait to read more....excellent job....keep up the good work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelgirlprincess on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:39:27 PM AEST
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To be perfectly honest, this isnt the time of poem that I normally like, but in good poems you can feel the emotion put into it. I felt it with this. Nice Job. Keep it up!

Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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welcome. great write. can't wait to read more.

Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:04:57 PM AEST
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I couldn't precisely say what you were trying to express in your poem but it just had a haunted feel to it. Like a chasm I can't even begin to imagine.

Welcome to YPDC.

Kie

Re: Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:15:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to the wonderful world of YPDC. We have some great poets on this site, and you appear to be one of them. You made sure you were noticed. Great poem. I look forward to more.

~Alucia~

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