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Array ( [sid] => 88414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold! [time] => 2005-03-22 22:02:10 [hometext] => Sometimes we hang on even though we are being left out in the cold. I hope you all ike this. Not easy to follow but it is what I felt. [bodytext] => ------------_____________-------------------

Its a little bit colder
But I'm still here
And I'm not sure if well make it around this time
But I sure hope so

And its raining out
And I can feel it
One thigs for sure,
Its pouring out

If I had to describe it
It kinda feels like
Feeling down
Like being down

And I cant pull away,
Just let me go
Because everyone here is all I got,
And all I know

From the middle to the end
Well take it slow
And everything before this
Just let it go.

Im a little bit older
But Im still sure we're gona make it this time
And I cant pull away, Just let me go
Because everyone here is all I got and all I know.

Tell me
When is it that we had enough
When is it that we heard enough
When are you going to led me from the cold?

You left me here so cold
I feel me pulling down
And Im a little bit older
And I still sure we'll make this time! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Cold!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:02:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

------------_____________-------------------

Its a little bit colder
But I'm still here
And I'm not sure if well make it around this time
But I sure hope so

And its raining out
And I can feel it
One thigs for sure,
Its pouring out

If I had to describe it
It kinda feels like
Feeling down
Like being down

And I cant pull away,
Just let me go
Because everyone here is all I got,
And all I know

From the middle to the end
Well take it slow
And everything before this
Just let it go.

Im a little bit older
But Im still sure we're gona make it this time
And I cant pull away, Just let me go
Because everyone here is all I got and all I know.

Tell me
When is it that we had enough
When is it that we heard enough
When are you going to led me from the cold?

You left me here so cold
I feel me pulling down
And Im a little bit older
And I still sure we'll make this time!

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-03-22 22:02:10]
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Re: Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:07:23 PM AEST
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wow you can feel the emotion in this.. awesome job I liked this and can definately relate..

JENNI

Re: Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:10:45 PM AEST
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This sounds like a song in my head. I like it.

Re: Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:36:16 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenAngel on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:22:25 PM AEST
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I followed it well. I like it alot. It sounds like it'd be a song. Thought about making it into lyrics?? Great job as usual!!

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