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Array ( [sid] => 88406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Internal War [time] => 2005-03-22 20:42:09 [hometext] => This is song is about the war inside my head. And yes, it's still raging even today. Seems like love really won't save us...as I have learned... [bodytext] => I wonder how long it’ll last this time
Before the fight cuts into the rhyme
I’m tired of all the love we lack
And the stupid memories this is bringing back
I wish I could just end this fight
And maybe you won’t be so uptight

I just don’t want your heart to break
With that said, this is all I can take
I care for you
And you know I do
I just wish you could understand my pain inside
It seems like all I know has died
Is it just the times?
Or is it my crimes?

Maybe someday
We can find a better way
Cause I don’t want to go back to yesterday
And I sure don’t want today

Hopefully you can comprehend this rhyme
And maybe we’ll show everyone my crime
Was it treason?
Or homicide without a reason?
Or maybe this so called suicide
Maybe I’m changing inside
I’ve seen the other side
When I was there I wanted to die
But now that I have you I feel guilty inside

What’s going on in my head?
Was it something that you said?
Or maybe it was the undead (in my head)

In my head

I have a reason
Welcome to the brand new season
I’m over my self-destruction
Maybe we can complete my internal construction
And maybe I can live

Maybe one day
Maybe someday
I will find a way
But not today
By the way
I killed yesterday
So that my past won’t haunt me today

In my head, I have a reason
Welcome to the brand new season
I’m over my self-destruction
Maybe we can complete my internal construction
And maybe, just maybe, I can live [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Internal War

Contributed by Bones on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:42:09 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I wonder how long it’ll last this time
Before the fight cuts into the rhyme
I’m tired of all the love we lack
And the stupid memories this is bringing back
I wish I could just end this fight
And maybe you won’t be so uptight

I just don’t want your heart to break
With that said, this is all I can take
I care for you
And you know I do
I just wish you could understand my pain inside
It seems like all I know has died
Is it just the times?
Or is it my crimes?

Maybe someday
We can find a better way
Cause I don’t want to go back to yesterday
And I sure don’t want today

Hopefully you can comprehend this rhyme
And maybe we’ll show everyone my crime
Was it treason?
Or homicide without a reason?
Or maybe this so called suicide
Maybe I’m changing inside
I’ve seen the other side
When I was there I wanted to die
But now that I have you I feel guilty inside

What’s going on in my head?
Was it something that you said?
Or maybe it was the undead (in my head)

In my head

I have a reason
Welcome to the brand new season
I’m over my self-destruction
Maybe we can complete my internal construction
And maybe I can live

Maybe one day
Maybe someday
I will find a way
But not today
By the way
I killed yesterday
So that my past won’t haunt me today

In my head, I have a reason
Welcome to the brand new season
I’m over my self-destruction
Maybe we can complete my internal construction
And maybe, just maybe, I can live




Copyright © Bones ... [ 2005-03-22 20:42:09]
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Re: Internal War (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:49:18 PM AEST
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One can feel the inner agony in this write.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy


Re: Internal War (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:25:35 AM AEST
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Yep, the battlefield of the mind - it's the place where our choices fight and our courses take shape. You've expressed both anguish and hope very well here.

Deeply felt words, that reach to the heart.
Also want to say that, the very fact that there's a war means there are two sides... stay on the side of the light.
Take care.








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