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Array ( [sid] => 88379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On Fertile Sand (Like Titan-Seed) [time] => 2005-03-22 17:29:33 [hometext] => In the beginning, there was Chaos, and Chaos begot Gaia. Then Gaia bore Uranus: and the sky covered the earth, and Gaia begot Cronos. And Uranus, the poor sot--was castrated and dethroned (with Gaia's blessing, no less). [bodytext] => Universal properties ever-present (in vertigo
of being) as from supine gaze, skyward-looking,
sphere of tortoise-shell proportion encompasses
all things earthly known and unknown;

In Mother's arms made warm amid still waters,
cold this overcast, lightning-flashed early summer's
eve (or was it morn?), alone but for the stars (and fish
within outstretched leg's proximity),

as, entangled, Mother and Child make love
(beneath hazy-filtered moon).

And all around him, giants mark his passing
from the here and now to the ecstatic hereafter,
as essence, in-transference (with Mother's lukewarm
embrace), makes liquid his equilibrium;

"Yet no place stands alone as more exotic..."
and she bucks, rebuffing him (rightly) his error
in response, while his passion (he has no better word
to describe it) now swiftly surges,

one part per million,
on fertile sand (like Titan-seed). [comments] => 1 [counter] => 523 [topic] => 42 [informant] => Sagacious [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology )

On Fertile Sand (Like Titan-Seed)

Contributed by Sagacious on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

Universal properties ever-present (in vertigo
of being) as from supine gaze, skyward-looking,
sphere of tortoise-shell proportion encompasses
all things earthly known and unknown;

In Mother's arms made warm amid still waters,
cold this overcast, lightning-flashed early summer's
eve (or was it morn?), alone but for the stars (and fish
within outstretched leg's proximity),

as, entangled, Mother and Child make love
(beneath hazy-filtered moon).

And all around him, giants mark his passing
from the here and now to the ecstatic hereafter,
as essence, in-transference (with Mother's lukewarm
embrace), makes liquid his equilibrium;

"Yet no place stands alone as more exotic..."
and she bucks, rebuffing him (rightly) his error
in response, while his passion (he has no better word
to describe it) now swiftly surges,

one part per million,
on fertile sand (like Titan-seed).

Copyright © Sagacious ... [ 2005-03-22 17:29:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: On Fertile Sand (Like Titan-Seed) (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:54:27 PM AEST
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WOW! Incredible imagery, my dear friend! Intense emotion, a lovely tale told by the great poet of surreal and enchanting expressions!! Thank you, Kris, for this exceptionally beautiful piece! Gorgeous flow, vivid imagery, and spoken so well! Dearest friend, you never fail to entrance and beguil with your sagacious words and undying wisdom. You keep to your name well. Perfection woven all over!!

Greek Mythology and your brilliant mind combined, creating the most breath-taking and mind-blowing work of art I have ever laid eyes on! Maginificent and so magical!! Thank you, cheri ami, for sharing this with us! I hope to see more from you! Always a pleasure reading your work. All my love to you, Andrea, and the children! Forever,

Votre petit fleur,

Stephy!! *still in awe!*

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