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[title] => The Raging Sea
[time] => 2005-03-22 13:21:07
[hometext] => A bipolar experience.... I had some uncertainty about when to use first person, any suggestions?
[bodytext] => Why so angry within? Calm one minute, distraught the next No buoy to mark the way The breezes just seem to blow haphazardly Where is the connection from for to aft? I can navigate from one end of the ship to the other But my thoughts and feelings are strangers to one another Out of the confusion another storm brews The wind howls harder and the sea becomes menacing She paces aimlessly, as the storm frightens her All those around take heed I am in no mood for company The storm intensifies into an angry raging sea The blackened churning waters cascading over the boat There is no help nearby as their location is quite remote The angry waves with their foaming lather Tower over the boat like giant gripping talons Ready to grab a soul and heave it into the sea to drown Finally the storm began to subside And she slowly ventured outside A bewildered look on her face A horrible thought, am I going to alienate the whole human race? Maybe I will just drown in my own sorrows And the salty tears began to flow Then finally the seas became calm [comments] => 7 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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