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[aid] => mick
[title] => MITTAH LOST MY MIND
[time] => 2005-03-22 06:49:48
[hometext] => Not really sure what inspired this but it was written 2/2?/05
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~Storm Wolf~
SultryRose's Signatures
Crap up to my nose,
Life is what we suppose.
Mis understandings creep in.
Ain't no pic nic, my friend.
Mittah lost my mind.
we all do it some time.
Mittah lost my mind
but neva my heart.
Been cleansed from dark.
She'd had more than
most compare
This life we live down here.
We all have our breaking points
Then we come un jointed.
My heart still pumps blood.
some see me as a skud.
Who cres if we don't jive
gotta keep our hearts a live.
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 190
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[informant] => emystar
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[score] => 35
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
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MITTAH LOST MY MIND
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:49:48 AM in AEST
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~Storm Wolf~
SultryRose's Signatures
Crap up to my nose,
Life is what we suppose.
Mis understandings creep in.
Ain't no pic nic, my friend.
Mittah lost my mind.
we all do it some time.
Mittah lost my mind
but neva my heart.
Been cleansed from dark.
She'd had more than
most compare
This life we live down here.
We all have our breaking points
Then we come un jointed.
My heart still pumps blood.
some see me as a skud.
Who cres if we don't jive
gotta keep our hearts a live.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-03-22 06:49:48]
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:05:54 AM AEST
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"gotto keep our hearts alive"
seems so simple, but the hardest thing to do...
This was nice. I liked the pic and the music, added umph. |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:13:36 AM AEST
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The words look and read well...
as for the sound...sorry but can't hear it...I knocked the speaker over onto the floor it's laying in the corner of the walls and I'm too tired and lazy to fumble around to get it....so....I....will....check the sound next time!~promise~
Cheers!~ |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:14:50 AM AEST
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I agree with Rx,
And I can relate to this, too.
Great picture and music choice, and especially great poem.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:46:20 AM AEST
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Gangsta mama you've done it again.
This was such an amazing write Emy, you're a cool chick with a beautiful heart.
Nicely written poem as always.
Jane |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:50:32 AM AEST
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| Great write, loved the picture. Much peace to you Laura |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:32:56 AM AEST
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Mittah lost my mind.
we all do it some time.
Mittah lost my mind
but neva my heart.
Been cleansed from dark.
Excellent Emy loved the pic and the music was lovely
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:37:37 AM AEST
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Mittah lost my mind.
we all do it some time.
Mittah lost my mind
but neva my heart.
ain't that the truth.
well said. |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:12:42 AM AEST
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| Nice wording for the down and outs. I especially liked the ending. Hugs from bernard |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:37:37 PM AEST
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You rock Girl. This is a great song. I loved the music and the picture. Gotta keep our hearts alive, is a really hard thing to do.
Well done Emy, another awesome piece from u my dear friend.
Hugs,
Sue
PS Hope ur hand is better today and let me know how u go at dr. okay. take care and may ur day be a very pleasant one. |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:18:25 AM AEST
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| I love it! So beautifully written! |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:04:35 AM AEST
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your poems are always very well writen then you add the songs and the picture its awsome. but back to the poem.....i know what thats like and you expressed it very well great job.
SM |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:48:26 PM AEST
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Well done! The picture really enhances the message and potency of your poem. I think there is a lot of wisdom in these beautifully written words.
Great job,
Willofree |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:43:10 AM AEST
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| Just decided to come and read this again, and caught the music this time. GREAT TUNE ! I love James Taylor. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:55:19 PM AEST
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Emmy Im feeling like that about 24/7 n e more. You write truth I hope those who have u in thier life appreciate such a gem!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOXOXJill |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:58:43 PM AEST
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Great poem.
Scott |
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Re: MITTAH LOST MY MIND
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:55:59 AM AEST
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In my case a mind is a terrible thing to have
so to lose it helps
at times
great poem.
The wind |
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