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So deep that my life's falling apart
The day you left and never came back
Turned my world upside down
Charred and black
I'm baffled and still don't know what to do
My heart is still yearning for you
Why did you go and leave me this way
Unanswered questions
Still 'til this day
I thought our love would last forever
Through the storms and sunny weather
But this burnt heart beats slowly fade
As the tears on my face masquerade
Time fuels the temples of my mind
How could I have lost a love so divine
When I turned my back and love lost its way
My heart laid broken
Shattered and dismayed
The stars have forgotten their glow
The moon shaded by umbrae
I wear this deep shadowed blackheart
Until you find your way back to me someday [comments] => 10 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

A Lost Love...

Contributed by mina-1 on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:34:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm so lost there's a hole in my heart
So deep that my life's falling apart
The day you left and never came back
Turned my world upside down
Charred and black
I'm baffled and still don't know what to do
My heart is still yearning for you
Why did you go and leave me this way
Unanswered questions
Still 'til this day
I thought our love would last forever
Through the storms and sunny weather
But this burnt heart beats slowly fade
As the tears on my face masquerade
Time fuels the temples of my mind
How could I have lost a love so divine
When I turned my back and love lost its way
My heart laid broken
Shattered and dismayed
The stars have forgotten their glow
The moon shaded by umbrae
I wear this deep shadowed blackheart
Until you find your way back to me someday

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-03-21 23:34:23]
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Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:52:42 PM AEST
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((((((4u))))) all i can say so sad please be well . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:14:29 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully written, and a piece I can certainly relate to all too well. You captured the true feelings of yearning for a lost love. Great work.

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:53:36 AM AEST
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very good writing.
I can relate but i also know that I trused God above else and if he came back now I'd be civil but he want get back in my bed. Hindsight is much more betta than hinsite. smile
You've exspressed the feelings well.
Remember your friends will support your heart to God as luv rules #1.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:05:18 AM AEST
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I know what you're goin through, and I know it's tough. Give it time, that's all you can do. And who knows maybe they will find their way back to you, it's not impossible :) wonderful write!

Curtis

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Beniam on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:58:17 AM AEST
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I find my self callused in this world, (although my love wasn't lost but hurled... couldn't help that one), and i think why poetry suffers for it, but you let it out, a great quality. I enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing.

Phi'lia
Beni

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:17:27 AM AEST
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A sad but well written poem..
hope this last line of your poem....
....until you find your way back to me someday....
comes true!`
cheers!~

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:42:05 AM AEST
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Awww this was so sad Mina. Hope you get it back together the love you both shared

Excellent

love Angelxxxx

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:36:41 PM AEST
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Lost loves - I think they stay with you no matter the course you take, This was written with conviction and sincerity.

Thanks for sharing.
mj

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:57:23 PM AEST
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talent is something you clearly possess and you are making good use of it.

Re: A Lost Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:08:29 AM AEST
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Most everything has been already said. you covered the feelings well.Sad and expressive.
Sinned

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