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From the dead of winter
Contributed by
Archie
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:01:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A calico blanket covers the earth
in a hue of vibrant colors
beneath it the animals sleep
in the protection of the canvas
winter winds yet all is calm
from the window of my view
a billowy white cotton sky
obscures my interlude
Calm down heart within my chest
Sunset lays my heart to rest
Nature brings love back to me
from the dead of winter
Calm down fears that do arrest
keep me joyous in the midst
of stormy gales that take their tolls
from the dead of winter
My heart feints for flowers
and summer tales of youth
Blossoms of great joy that say
the winter has passed through
From the canopy of sky
Concrete forests fade and hide
trees appear in flourishing life
from the dead of winter
A blanket covers all the earth
beneath it man and beast do sleep
I smell the sweet and fragrant mirth
A peace to me my soul bequeath
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-03-21 20:01:53]
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by catz77 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:06:06 PM AEST
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this is a real good poem
i love the 2nd part
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by arden on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:33:37 PM AEST
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this. was. beautiful.
wow, i loved the very detailed picture you painted in my mind.
the usage of words and the imagery was just amazing.
this was an awesome poem.
great work.
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:48:01 PM AEST
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This piece has a simple, well-expressed theme. An excellent read. Well done, my friend.
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:46:37 AM AEST
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Welcome back archie, and this as beautiful as ever u may have left but u haven't gone away . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:29:24 AM AEST
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WOW!!! such an amazing detail and the imagety you created was amazing.
This was perfect in every single way.
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:50:55 AM AEST
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Lovely to see your posts again Archie. Where have you been? So glad you are back.
Nature with its many splendours
Excellent
love Angelxxxx |
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:12:21 PM AEST
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totally fell in love with this poem Archie! this poem is right up my street with lines like: 'From the canopy of sky
Concrete forests fade and hide
trees appear in flourishing life
from the dead of winter' - wow i absolutely loved this piece - a msater piece if you will!
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Re: From the dead of winter
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:59:41 PM AEST
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Excellent imagery!!!
I think I'll take these thoughts to bed with me tonight...
Hugs
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