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Array ( [sid] => 8827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dear Mommy [time] => 2002-12-18 21:00:00 [hometext] => Written for my Wife, from the eyes of my 5 month old son. [bodytext] => DEAR MOMMY

MOMMY IF I COULD TALK, THESE ARE WHAT MY WORDS WOULD SAY,
AS YOU KNOW I’M GROWNING BIGGER WITH EVERY PASSING DAY.
I KNOW I TAKE UP MOST OF YOUR TIME, WITH MY CONSTANT LITTLE NEEDS,
WASHING CLOTHES, CHANGING DIAPERS, AND MY LITTLE BOTTLE FEEDS.
BUT I PROMISE THERE WILL COME ADAY WHEN I’LL DO IT ON MY OWN,
WHEN MY DAYS OF BEING HELPLESS ARE HOPEFULLY ALL BEEN SOWN.
EACH NEW DAY I’M TOTALLY AMAZED WITH WHAT MY BODY’S ABLE TO DO,
AND I’LL TRY TO BE MORE INDEPENDENT, WHEN I’M GROWING STAGE IS THROUGH.
BUT FOR NOW I NEED YOUR HELP TO GET THROUGH EACH AND EVERY DAY,
AND I’LL TRY TO EXPRESS MY THANKSFULNESS IN MY OWN SPECIAL WAY.
MOST DAYS I DON’T WANT TO CLOSE MY EYES, FOR THERES SO MUCH TO EXPLORE,
SEEING AND LEANING OH SO MANY THINGS FROM LIFE’S LITTLE TOUR.
I HOPE YOU REALIZE JUST HOW MUCH I APPRECIATE YOU BEING THERE,
EVEN IF IT MEANS YOU HAVE TO SET ASIDE ALL YOUR OTHER CARES.
AND MOM, I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WHY SOMETIMES I HAVE TO CRY,
IT’S MY WAY OF GETTING YOUR ATTENTION, AND THAT’S THE REASON WHY.
SO BEAR WITH ME MOM AS I MAKE THIS TRANSITION FROM A BABY TO A MAN,
AND I PROMISE I’LL TRY TO BE THE BEST BABY THAT YOU I CAN.
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Dear Mommy

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



DEAR MOMMY

MOMMY IF I COULD TALK, THESE ARE WHAT MY WORDS WOULD SAY,
AS YOU KNOW I’M GROWNING BIGGER WITH EVERY PASSING DAY.
I KNOW I TAKE UP MOST OF YOUR TIME, WITH MY CONSTANT LITTLE NEEDS,
WASHING CLOTHES, CHANGING DIAPERS, AND MY LITTLE BOTTLE FEEDS.
BUT I PROMISE THERE WILL COME ADAY WHEN I’LL DO IT ON MY OWN,
WHEN MY DAYS OF BEING HELPLESS ARE HOPEFULLY ALL BEEN SOWN.
EACH NEW DAY I’M TOTALLY AMAZED WITH WHAT MY BODY’S ABLE TO DO,
AND I’LL TRY TO BE MORE INDEPENDENT, WHEN I’M GROWING STAGE IS THROUGH.
BUT FOR NOW I NEED YOUR HELP TO GET THROUGH EACH AND EVERY DAY,
AND I’LL TRY TO EXPRESS MY THANKSFULNESS IN MY OWN SPECIAL WAY.
MOST DAYS I DON’T WANT TO CLOSE MY EYES, FOR THERES SO MUCH TO EXPLORE,
SEEING AND LEANING OH SO MANY THINGS FROM LIFE’S LITTLE TOUR.
I HOPE YOU REALIZE JUST HOW MUCH I APPRECIATE YOU BEING THERE,
EVEN IF IT MEANS YOU HAVE TO SET ASIDE ALL YOUR OTHER CARES.
AND MOM, I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WHY SOMETIMES I HAVE TO CRY,
IT’S MY WAY OF GETTING YOUR ATTENTION, AND THAT’S THE REASON WHY.
SO BEAR WITH ME MOM AS I MAKE THIS TRANSITION FROM A BABY TO A MAN,
AND I PROMISE I’LL TRY TO BE THE BEST BABY THAT YOU I CAN.




Copyright © Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2002-12-18 21:00:00]
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Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Devlina on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:33:17 PM AEST
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That was a great way af putting it! Taking it back, and making me appreciate my mother. I am a mommies girl myself, so I can appreciate that.


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 12:10:21 AM AEST
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Jeff, this is absolutely wonderful... Gives being a baby a different viewpoint... Just loved this...
Jenni


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 07:47:26 AM AEST
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ewwwwwwww soooooo beautiful how the baby understand all the sacrifices his mom do.he must be a smart baby and u must be a smart guy to understand his transition , as father as son *SMILES*
hehehe, great write , i enjoyed it a lot


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:17:55 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful...and such a beautiful thing for a father to do ...this poem should be etched for her somewhere...i dont know why i've had this thing with candles lately but maybe that would be a beautiful place to put this poem is in the side of a beautiful colorful candle....Your son will love that you did this when he get's older...not many men would do this one...thanks for sharing it....i enjoyed it tremendously...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:07:46 AM AEST
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I wrote one something like this for my neices baby shower! It was a big hit!I really liked this one though! Great write! Christina


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:21:22 AM AEST
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that was soooo cute!!!
i hope your wife read this
and i hope you let your son read it
when he is old enough
sooo sweet


Re: Dear Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by brandywyne on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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liked it....good write




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