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Forever Becoming Forgotten
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone and numb
Because I'm calisted
To the bone
Broken and cold
Because my wounds
Are unhealed and open
Pained and forgotten
Because I'm nothing
With this life I cannot sustain
Condemed and chained
Because my life
Is becoming decayed
Unknown and all cried out
Because my being forgotten
Hurts worse then me dieing
Alone
...
I cannot withstand it
And my flame is dead
For I will not relight it
For death I do not dread
...
And as the final smoke rises
My life expires
For being forgotten was my demise
And the reason for letting my soul
Rise Higher
With my own actions
That might come as a surprise
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-21 18:43:45]
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Re: Forever Becoming Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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cool poem.
the expression of hopelessness was awesome.
well written and told.
great work.
Arden |
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Re: Forever Becoming Forgotten
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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| i feel the same way these days. ::sigh:: so miserable and makes me write pathetically too. if only i could handle it as well as you can with your writing... |
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