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Array ( [sid] => 88240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2005-03-21 16:52:06 [hometext] => Ok, remember the ex that I thought still wanted me? He called me [bodytext] => Baby?
You're still calling me baby?
It's like you want me to hold on
When I know we've got nothing left
We still love eachother
But we won't fly to eachother's arms
For fear of paining, fear of shaming
Fear of breaking eachother's hearts
So why should I hold on?
Why won't you let me go?
You've found someone so much better
Yet you keep me hoping there's something ahead
Like you don't want me to leave
But I wasn't planning on going
I was just moving on
Staying there as a friend
Yet you still insist on giving me my nickname
From when we were together
So I can't move on
I'm so confused
Did you want me to come back to you?
But you know I won't when you have her
Tell me what you want of me
So I won't wait on you forever [comments] => 6 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Confused

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Baby?
You're still calling me baby?
It's like you want me to hold on
When I know we've got nothing left
We still love eachother
But we won't fly to eachother's arms
For fear of paining, fear of shaming
Fear of breaking eachother's hearts
So why should I hold on?
Why won't you let me go?
You've found someone so much better
Yet you keep me hoping there's something ahead
Like you don't want me to leave
But I wasn't planning on going
I was just moving on
Staying there as a friend
Yet you still insist on giving me my nickname
From when we were together
So I can't move on
I'm so confused
Did you want me to come back to you?
But you know I won't when you have her
Tell me what you want of me
So I won't wait on you forever

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-03-21 16:52:06]
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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:09:48 PM AEST
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Oh hun..I'm so sorry this guy is confusing you like this.
He needs some sense, and he definatly needs to tell you what is going on.
But hun? Don't let him play games with you, K?
I know you like him, butif he's going to string you around, I think you deserve someone better.

Good write, your emotions show well.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:53:14 PM AEST
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Kie, this is a clever piece. I love the way you wrapped the write around the word Baby.
It would make life so much easier if everything were black and white. I for one am glad its not, but it sure does make things tough sometimes.
Great piece of work!

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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Baby?
"You're still calling me baby?
It's like you want me to hold on
When I know we've got nothing left
We still love eachother
But we won't fly to eachother's arms
For fear of paining, fear of shaming
Fear of breaking eachother's hearts
So why should I hold on?
Why won't you let me go?"

Girl I feel ya! I really liked this one. SO now all you have to do is let him go and never turn back. Nice write swetie, I enjoyed reading it.

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:18:58 AM AEST
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I see you're trapped in that
cycle of confusion
that burns ya oh so deeply....
emotional InnerVision.

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:10:21 AM AEST
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Oh I hear you Kie. Don't let him play mind games with you no matter how much you love him. He seems to want the best of both worlds. If he is not willing to come to you with honesty and trust then you are better off without him.
Speaking from experience.. so many wasted years (holding back the years) by simply red says it all.
Best to move on unless he is willing to give you the love you so deserve.
Whilst he is taking up your valuable time your heart is closed to love that could pass you by.

An amazing heartfelt poem

Love Angelxxxx

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:59:38 AM AEST
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Take one step and front of the other and and don't look back. You can find another one that will love you and stay with you... If he done it once he will do it again... great write.

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