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Array ( [sid] => 8823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Falling Farther [time] => 2002-12-18 19:40:00 [hometext] => *I'd almost given up hope when I wrote this. It's sort of like Stone Sour's song "Bother". Its a rather simple poem, but accurately describes how I felt/feel.* [bodytext] => I'm falling farther
Screaming in disarray
I hate being the loser
I hate the biting pain
And the agony tearing deep within

If you'd look into my eyes
You might see the scenes
Replaying over and over
And the question marks
Wondering where I ***** up

These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back

Sitting here all alone
Just wanting to bleed,
But I'm so confused
Don't know why
I feel this way

I'm falling farther
My voice has been stripped from me
I'm falling harder
I'm amazed at the emotion I lack
I'm falling farther

These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back [comments] => 6 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Falling Farther

Contributed by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'm falling farther
Screaming in disarray
I hate being the loser
I hate the biting pain
And the agony tearing deep within

If you'd look into my eyes
You might see the scenes
Replaying over and over
And the question marks
Wondering where I ***** up

These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back

Sitting here all alone
Just wanting to bleed,
But I'm so confused
Don't know why
I feel this way

I'm falling farther
My voice has been stripped from me
I'm falling harder
I'm amazed at the emotion I lack
I'm falling farther

These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back

Copyright Â© bobotheclown ... [ 2002-12-18 19:40:00]
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Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:48:34 PM AEST
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this poem has so much emotion and is really well done. Its so different from mine, and thats what makes it beautiful to me. I dont write hardly ever about personal expeiriences, but i wonder if i did, would they be like this?
great
bis spater
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Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:00:02 PM AEST
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wow your poems are all so awesome filled with so much anger and hurt....

Lasca

Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:59:33 PM AEST
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This write has edge, anger , hurt, hopelessness; so much emotion. I love it and I really can relate. Take care & don't give in.

R.

Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:05:58 AM AEST
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The only words i feel like saying here on this write is......beleive in yourself and everything will turn out in life beautifully for you..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by ashleigh4 on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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jeez, wat can i say? i know exactly where you're coming from... this is so true, i can really relate to it...
thankyou for this it's realy good....

Re: Falling Farther (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:13:27 AM AEST
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your work is awesome i can feel your pain...but hang in there so many people feel just like you they need you to let them know they are not alone. You have talent

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