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I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

Having waited for this moment so long
I turn away from this place
Where everything's changed me so much
Walking away with a smile
These memories will finally fade

It's the last time I'm walking this track
I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

Leaving nothing but fingerprints back
I'll never return to here again
Time heals wounds they say
But will I be able to smile once I look back

It's the last time I'm walking this track
I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

It's now been years since I'd left
I still don't regret I did
Surely haven't missed it at all
Finally living my own life

I back then I'd walked this track
Approaching a new part of my life
Turning a smiling face to new future
Walking into the freedom I'd seen ahead

Into happiness... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 67 [informant] => SugimotoYouki [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )
Escape

Contributed by SugimotoYouki on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:42:56 AM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems



It's the last time I'm walking this track
I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

Having waited for this moment so long
I turn away from this place
Where everything's changed me so much
Walking away with a smile
These memories will finally fade

It's the last time I'm walking this track
I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

Leaving nothing but fingerprints back
I'll never return to here again
Time heals wounds they say
But will I be able to smile once I look back

It's the last time I'm walking this track
I'm saying goodbye to a part of my life
Turning my back to forget all that has been
Reaching out for the freedom ahead

It's now been years since I'd left
I still don't regret I did
Surely haven't missed it at all
Finally living my own life

I back then I'd walked this track
Approaching a new part of my life
Turning a smiling face to new future
Walking into the freedom I'd seen ahead

Into happiness...




Copyright © SugimotoYouki ... [ 2005-03-21 09:42:56]
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Re: Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:47:09 AM AEST
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graduating huh? I fear that day every time I wake up and I'm only a freshman in college ... good luck in the future!


Re: Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:43:41 AM AEST
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Hey, this is a very good poem I very much enjoyed reading it! its so peaceful but yet so much meaning well Great Write and I hope you enjoy your freedom... away from school and Good Luck ^_^




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