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Array ( [sid] => 88176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Object of my affection [time] => 2005-03-21 08:11:00 [hometext] => when you realize you haven't been brave at all, and second chances are rare. [bodytext] => Good God is going to be hard
forgetting you.
I’m standing on a tin ice
waiting for a glass
to smash and hit me in the face.
In ominous silence it cracks beneath me.
Still, I’m frozen
not moving a muscle
just now realizing
you where chosen long ago.
Epiphany came my way
like a storm on sunny day.
You are the beginning and the end
I won’t and can not defend
from traces of you
shaping every new
object of my affection.
Ages ago you made a mark
It’s still there,
visible in a thickest dark
wish you could see what I made of me
never at ease, eager to please
angry at my faulted nature
cause I started to feel
when you stopped being real,
cause it took me a while
to bare your core and let myself go.
By then it was over,
your wretchedness left
no room for mending
my awkwardness went
far beyond defending.
Today, various are the ways
you dress your haze
Oh, your disguise is brilliant as ever
but it won’t fool my eyes,
I learned to see through it well
no matter how solid your shell.
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Object of my affection

Contributed by enamat on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:11:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Good God is going to be hard
forgetting you.
I’m standing on a tin ice
waiting for a glass
to smash and hit me in the face.
In ominous silence it cracks beneath me.
Still, I’m frozen
not moving a muscle
just now realizing
you where chosen long ago.
Epiphany came my way
like a storm on sunny day.
You are the beginning and the end
I won’t and can not defend
from traces of you
shaping every new
object of my affection.
Ages ago you made a mark
It’s still there,
visible in a thickest dark
wish you could see what I made of me
never at ease, eager to please
angry at my faulted nature
cause I started to feel
when you stopped being real,
cause it took me a while
to bare your core and let myself go.
By then it was over,
your wretchedness left
no room for mending
my awkwardness went
far beyond defending.
Today, various are the ways
you dress your haze
Oh, your disguise is brilliant as ever
but it won’t fool my eyes,
I learned to see through it well
no matter how solid your shell.




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Re: Object of my affection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:44:29 PM AEST
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you paint such vivid pictures with your poetry!! and such emotion, i have felt this way too.




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