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Array ( [sid] => 88172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Titbits [time] => 2005-03-21 07:15:24 [hometext] => Some strange thoughts that entered my mind at 3.00 AM in the morning [bodytext] => A roof that leaks,
a wife who gossips,
a neighbor who peeps,
a pet that bites,
they cause endless grief.

A curious servant,
a nymphomaniac wife,
a lazy brother,
a spendthrift son,
get rid of them.

Two wives at home,
a secretary who flirts,
a boss who grins,
a friend who flatters,
you will die soon.

Walk after dinner,
pay your loans,
remember some birthdays,
crush your enemies,
you will live long.
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Titbits

Contributed by Ravi on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 07:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



A roof that leaks,
a wife who gossips,
a neighbor who peeps,
a pet that bites,
they cause endless grief.

A curious servant,
a nymphomaniac wife,
a lazy brother,
a spendthrift son,
get rid of them.

Two wives at home,
a secretary who flirts,
a boss who grins,
a friend who flatters,
you will die soon.

Walk after dinner,
pay your loans,
remember some birthdays,
crush your enemies,
you will live long.




Copyright © Ravi ... [ 2005-03-21 07:15:24]
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Re: Titbits (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:58:51 AM AEST
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Whoa... interesting poem. I like it though. Nice write...
Jodi


Re: Titbits (User Rating: 1 )
by pastiche247 on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:40:36 PM AEST
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Real stream-of-consciousness writing!
Hmm - from "A roof that leaks," to "crush your enemies".'
You must have had a fascinating day for these thoughts to pop up in this order!

I like the idea of the first three stanzas pulling life down with its mundaneness as opposed to the final, decisive stanza.

I really enjoyed it! Something to get my teeth into - and really think about!

Best,
p




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