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inside the soul
I poke and prick
at your heart with my darkness

I rip your love to shreds
making you bleed from my attacks

I take all I can
until there is nothing but an emptiness
inside of you

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Making you empty

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:42:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Angry again
inside the soul
I poke and prick
at your heart with my darkness

I rip your love to shreds
making you bleed from my attacks

I take all I can
until there is nothing but an emptiness
inside of you

JENNI

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Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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I could really feel your anger and frustration in this. Your emotion really comes out in so few words. Nice work.

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:10:15 PM AEST
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I can certainly relate. I know when I've had enuff, God help the************that's in my way best move. Still i have to things till my patience is empty as u discribe here.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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well said, i think everybody finds themselves in a situation such as this where for one reason or another we try and drag someone down with us

'I rip your love to shreds
making you bleed from my attacks'

the honesty of no remorse, so few words, beautiful

... in words electrique

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:52:43 AM AEST
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Such an emotive write clearly describing you're emotions so well.

Nicely done Jen.

Jane

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:14:56 PM AEST
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I've never experienced this, I don't think... but your poem certainly makes me want to notice this kind of feeling when it arises...
hmmm...

Lots of love and peace,

Chelsea

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:18:02 PM AEST
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WOW.. when your mad you get even...I like

I rip your love to shreds making you bleed from my attacks.. ouch !

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:06:44 PM AEST
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Until there is nothing but emptiness inside of you.
complete emptiness--Depression-that deep dark abyss. hat a terrible wish.
Grat write.

Sinned

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:21:01 AM AEST
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A very impressive descriptive write. Well done.

Re: Making you empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:58:08 PM AEST
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piercing pain, Jenn. ..

Horrible way to feel, though expertly expressed here.
The imagery is masterful ... very emotive. (and angry ..)

I hope you are happier today .. : )

~Breezy

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