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I still can't sleep
When I close my eyes I'm lost in dreams
Dreams where I have you to keep
In these dreams
I can see your smile
Hear your voice
And I'm happy for a while
I can lay with you
Hold you tight
Be with you
And everything's right
And it's so wonderful
Being in my dreams
Where I cn sit and talk with you
And escape almost anything
But that's all they are
Pictures in my mind
Dreams where you didn't have to go
And leve your love behind [comments] => 9 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Dreams

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's been a month
I still can't sleep
When I close my eyes I'm lost in dreams
Dreams where I have you to keep
In these dreams
I can see your smile
Hear your voice
And I'm happy for a while
I can lay with you
Hold you tight
Be with you
And everything's right
And it's so wonderful
Being in my dreams
Where I cn sit and talk with you
And escape almost anything
But that's all they are
Pictures in my mind
Dreams where you didn't have to go
And leve your love behind

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-03-20 20:22:30]
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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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excellent write...sad and yet verry happy with your dreams. Im sorry you lost someone you loved, it happened to me about 1 year ago and I still think about it constantly ~~Crystal~~

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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one thing i've come to understand...the body may not be available for the caress but as long as that someone is kept in the heart and mind, no one truly ever is gone. touching read.
thanks for sharing

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:15:47 PM AEST
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They are still in your heart & I'm sure visit you often! Sad! Christina

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:11:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem Kie be paitent or the dream shall dissapate and along with it, the love u seek.

Dorian Chambers

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:55:34 AM AEST
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SORRY,ABOUT YOUR LOSS! HE MUST'VE BEEN A REAL INSPIRATION TO YOU,AS WE CAN ALL READ FROM THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT YOU WROTE!! PLEASE TAKE CARE!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:33:22 AM AEST
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So sorry that you have lost someone you loved Kie. Dreams are a way of getting closer to the person you have lost. He will always be in your thoughts and live on in your heart forever. For those we love never die.

A touching heartfelt write

A Marvellous poem

(((HUGS)))))

Lots of love Angelxxxx

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:02:42 AM AEST
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awee.. here is a hug... time passes by and it aches less but then a memory will come and your in pain again.

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:36:26 PM AEST
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*****But that's all they are
Pictures in my mind
Dreams where you didn't have to go
And leve your love behind

And aren't we lucky that our LORD gave us the ability to dream. I would like to believe that is a place where we can go to meet our loved lost ones, until we again meet them in heaven.

Beautiful write.. because it holds a good place in my mind.. where I still dream too of all the ones who have passed on... especially my first husband. I can always go there in my dreams to visit. Thank you so much for creating this valuable poem.

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Sicone on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:43:31 PM AEST
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Wow...that is nice, really it is.

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