Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 14:55:48 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 88128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someday...you will [time] => 2005-03-20 19:30:29 [hometext] => no I wont...end my life.. [bodytext] => Someday you'll feel the pain i felt
Someday you'll cry for me
Someday you'll walk the lonely road
of pain and misery

Someday your empty heart will break
Someday you'll wanna die
Someday your eyes will burn so bad
with the desperate need to cry

Someday you'll hide behind a smile
Someday you'll hold the knife
Someday you'll miss someone so bad
you'll want to end your life

Someday you'll hold a picture of me
and ask the question why
Someday you'll want me back so bad
enough to make you cry

Someday you'll hurt real bad inside
you wont know what to do
Someday you'll find you love me
but someday I wont love you
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LIving_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Someday...you will

Contributed by LIving_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:30:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Someday you'll feel the pain i felt
Someday you'll cry for me
Someday you'll walk the lonely road
of pain and misery

Someday your empty heart will break
Someday you'll wanna die
Someday your eyes will burn so bad
with the desperate need to cry

Someday you'll hide behind a smile
Someday you'll hold the knife
Someday you'll miss someone so bad
you'll want to end your life

Someday you'll hold a picture of me
and ask the question why
Someday you'll want me back so bad
enough to make you cry

Someday you'll hurt real bad inside
you wont know what to do
Someday you'll find you love me
but someday I wont love you

Copyright © LIving_In_My_Dream ... [ 2005-03-20 19:30:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:34:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I enjoyed reading your poem I had to read it twice because I liked it so so much. That person didnt love you in the beginning but, they will find out they love you and youll be over them...~~Crystal~~

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow, that was a very powerful poem. I really liked it. It flowed so well too. I can't think of the right words to say to express myself, but just trust that it was very good.

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:47:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

That's a really awesome write.

--Kara

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:58:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is such an incredible write. I really did love it.

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

dani you wrote this one so well. this was brilliant. a masterpiece. your talent is clearly expressed in this. and sometimes someday is just a day away....

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:17:42 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Whoa!!! this was wickedly done.

Nicely writen poem, im so gladi got to read this.

Jane

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:16:21 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I liked this poem. I can relate in a sense. Great write. Sometimes a simple day is a lot closer than it seems.

~Alucia~

Re: Someday...you will (User Rating: 1 )
by aidious on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:09:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This poem is so uplifting - I love poems like this.

Thanks LIving_In_My_Dream

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com