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Screams out your name
And this is what you've done to me
Made me trust you
Made me love you
As hard as I try I can't drink away your memory
Or sleep away my pain
Memories of you and I
Are burning through my mind
And as much as I wish it wasn't true
My black heart still beats and bleeds
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My Black Heart

Contributed by Katie2008 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:27:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The blood that pours from my veins
Screams out your name
And this is what you've done to me
Made me trust you
Made me love you
As hard as I try I can't drink away your memory
Or sleep away my pain
Memories of you and I
Are burning through my mind
And as much as I wish it wasn't true
My black heart still beats and bleeds
For you

Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2005-03-20 16:27:11]
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Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:27:39 PM AEST
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"As hard as I try I can't drink away your memory"

I love that part. It describes what I'm going through right now. Amazing write.

--Kara

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:46:06 PM AEST
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This is very strong and straight from the heart

an effective peice of writting felt the vibes

from it . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:47:35 PM AEST
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This is very strong and straight from the heart

an effective peice of writting felt the vibes

from it . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:33:48 AM AEST
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What an fantastic poem. I can so relate to this. Well done and thanks for posting.

Jane

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:41:48 AM AEST
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Short and straight to the point. Well done. i loved this Stanza

"As hard as i try i can't drink away your memory"

That reminds me of "Whiskey Lullaby" By Brad Paisely. Great song..makes me cry. The video makes me cry worse. Anyways now i'm rambling. Gret write.

~Alucia~

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT!!! It's amazing!!

Re: My Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:46:58 AM AEST
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I really liked this one....I love the bitter regret in this poem...very dark...great job

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