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[aid] => mick
[title] => Me
[time] => 2005-03-20 05:09:30
[hometext] => This is replacing about 10 poems that I have just deleted of mine, sorry if you didnt get to read them, but they have been totally deleted, even from my hard drives!
[bodytext] =>
I'll warn you now, if interested in me
My heart is open for you to see
but if it's games you wish to play
just don't bother for I'll not stay
I've been lied to in the past
I've been kicked hard in the .....butt
So I will be wary from now on
and I will find out before too long
You all know I'm lonely, and wish company
But honesty's a must, or there's no fun to be
I keep my morals, and if I do find deceit
I'm out that door, fast on my feet
So before you play, give it some thought
my heart is now harder, and can not be caught
but if you are honest, right from the start
you may just make it into my heart.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 971
[topic] => 43
[informant] => Mick_Puttock
[notes] =>
(Edited for spelling by Mod_11) :>)
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 24
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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Me
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:09:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'll warn you now, if interested in me
My heart is open for you to see
but if it's games you wish to play
just don't bother for I'll not stay
I've been lied to in the past
I've been kicked hard in the .....butt
So I will be wary from now on
and I will find out before too long
You all know I'm lonely, and wish company
But honesty's a must, or there's no fun to be
I keep my morals, and if I do find deceit
I'm out that door, fast on my feet
So before you play, give it some thought
my heart is now harder, and can not be caught
but if you are honest, right from the start
you may just make it into my heart.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2005-03-20 05:09:30]
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Re: Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:57:30 AM AEST
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Mick this was such a well writen piece.
I liked how you wrote it showing a lot of feeling to the reader.
Nice to see you back and posting you're work again.
Jane |
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Re: Me
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:37:26 AM AEST
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| You couldn't have made it any better. To have thrown away the other pieces only shows that you gave your write some thought. I appreciate the end product because they make sense and are beautifully put. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Me
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:58:13 PM AEST
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| great to see you posting more. i love your work. and this is a great write!! |
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Re: Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:21:12 PM AEST
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| aaWW cHIN UP YOU AE STRONG! gLAD TO SEE YOUR POEMS AGAIN! cHRISTINA |
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Re: Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:35:15 AM AEST
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Now u sound like me Mick.
True there are many that like to play but they'll get it back someday.
huggs,
emy
good write. |
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Re: Me
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by mylady on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:17:43 PM AEST
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| Your poem is nice ... moral is a very important think in a relationship ...good luck.. |
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Re: Me
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:30:58 AM AEST
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| Excellent write Mick. :o) Happy to see you posting again my Aussie friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Me
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by brew on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:40:39 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write, and straight to the pont. Well done. |
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Re: Me
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by freckle on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:59:31 PM AEST
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I liked this poem Mick. I wish the world wasn't like that but unfortunately it is so often. I would rather have a few true friends than a whole bunch of fair weather friends.
May you invite into your heart only those who truly need to be there! Thanks for the thought provoking write!
Carol |
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Re: Me
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:43:56 AM AEST
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What a great poem Mick!
How lucky I am to have caught you on the Home Page listing,
I agree 100% with your philosophie.
No honesty - no matter what the result- I am out the door- just like you.
But, Mick, - I still get no Notification for comments. This is so sad. All I get is "Private Messages"
- and depend on "good luck" to detect a new comment on page 10 in my portfolio.
Needs the sixth sense! :) :) Clairvoyance :) (O :)
GReat poem Mick. Kudos!
Elizabeth - clayrvoyant |
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Re: Me
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:49:00 AM AEST
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Hi Mick!
I already commented to this outstanding poem. But it did not come up, have to give it a s econd try.
Has something to do perhaps with my not getting Comment Notifications. Porca Miseria.
Have to become clrayvoyant to intuit a new comment on Page 9 in my portfolio as a result. Must learn to live on intuition and clairvoyance :) :)
The poem is great. I am 100% with you as to honesty, no matter what.
KUDOS
Elizabeth
(can you see that I get notifications?
My clayrvoyance is not commensurate with the demands. :) |
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Re: Me
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 19th October 2016 @ 07:42:59 PM AEST
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Nice poem although the rhyme is a bit pedantic. I expected something else.
This is the only way I can find to communicate with you Mick. I/'/m trying to buy an account but I can/'/t afford $100. Also I don/'/t have PayPal and don/'/t want it. I only have a Visa card ... The site almost seems abandoned since it was put up for sale. Why not let Kevin, the owner of AllPoetry know? Maybe he can combine the sites or something? Anyway let me know if you can accept my Visa. |
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