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[sid] => 8805
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => ~~Barbs~~
[time] => 2002-12-18 11:00:00
[hometext] => i wrote this when someone i believed in and trusted with all of my heart, betrayed me and broke my world.....
[bodytext] => ***** you,
You poison my world,
and make it an unbearable place to live.
You think the words you say hurt me,
But what hurts me was that i trusted you.
You need to die.
Fall to hell and burn,
Feel like i Feel.
I cant even look at you,
You are so repulsive to me now.
You owned my soul, you knew everything,
Then you threw it all away,
You threw me away,
And exposed me.
You caused a hate so fierce,
i almost gave up on the living -
I hate you
I hate you
I hate you
You are buried deep in the ground,
You are covered by by a sheet of black.
You let no other enter.
You are scum and you dont deserve to live.
You need to die, and experience pain.
But even then, the pain would never be,
as bad of the pain you have caused me.
Now you can no longer control me.
The Urges i had to beat you to the ground are gone,
I look at you and laugh.
You cant get pleasure from my pain anymore;
Because the pain no longer exists....
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 318
[topic] => 13
[informant] => Delusions
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DarkPoetry
)
~~Barbs~~
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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***** you,
You poison my world,
and make it an unbearable place to live.
You think the words you say hurt me,
But what hurts me was that i trusted you.
You need to die.
Fall to hell and burn,
Feel like i Feel.
I cant even look at you,
You are so repulsive to me now.
You owned my soul, you knew everything,
Then you threw it all away,
You threw me away,
And exposed me.
You caused a hate so fierce,
i almost gave up on the living -
I hate you
I hate you
I hate you
You are buried deep in the ground,
You are covered by by a sheet of black.
You let no other enter.
You are scum and you dont deserve to live.
You need to die, and experience pain.
But even then, the pain would never be,
as bad of the pain you have caused me.
Now you can no longer control me.
The Urges i had to beat you to the ground are gone,
I look at you and laugh.
You cant get pleasure from my pain anymore;
Because the pain no longer exists....
Copyright ©
Delusions
... [
2002-12-18 11:00:00]
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:14:28 PM AEST
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Wow, this is how I used to feel about a girl that hurt me badly. I wrote a rant similar to this one. I felt thepain somewhat diminish after I wrote it. But the pain only completely diminished once I totally got her out of my life and forgave her. This is what u need to do with this person. Distance yourself and forgive. Its hard I know I saw the girl last week and I didn't hate there was a peace inside that was much better theprevious times I'd seen her. Hope u follow my 'vice.
-Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by HumGirl18 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:20:12 PM AEST
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wonderful
full of feelings and emotions.
I like it |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:54:10 PM AEST
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WOW!!! This is so full of passion!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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Wow Delusions...this is sad...yet inspirational...yet painful....and beautifully written...it has alot of emotions in it...thanks for sharing ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:08:32 AM AEST
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this is amazing, as i read it, its as if im actually feeling the anger and the pain its great... keep it up...
~Broken_Skin~ |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 02:31:44 AM AEST
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| Sharp and straight. A very good blast of feelings. Venkat |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 07:03:20 AM AEST
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| sooooo pippi, did you go to the beach today?? |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:51:06 AM AEST
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strong emotive write
brings out anger and pain
well done
peace be yuor journey
Terry |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:40:11 PM AEST
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| awesome and incredible...you gave me images and feelings inside when i was reading this...very, very good... |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:24:00 AM AEST
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~:*wow*:~ this is excellent, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:46:32 AM AEST
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Wow...this is a really powerful write...excellent job....lots of emotion...i loved it
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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bastardo!!!! at least we learn from these guys and their stupidity is all i can say!!the bad thing is that u got hurt obviously but the good thing is that u write poetry like this when stuff like that happens....it's great when the pen just runs by itself on the page and all of these strong emotions and words appear that explain exactly how u feel. i love this poem sweety...i think coz i know the guy too it makes a lot more sense haha.
keep using ur gift and writing!!
luv u
becca |
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Re: ~~Barbs~~
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by tWiStLe on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:05:20 AM AEST
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| Its not funni... but more quite ironic that u ended up going out with this guy... after all this pain and anguish... and u ended up almost loving him or wateva... i dont kno the full story but *****.... |
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