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How could I resist
I wanted you to like me
So after PE in the tennis courts
I lifted my shirt up so you could see
You had a look of excitement
It made me smile
You said that it was nice
I thought we'd be closer
But now you just leave
Any time I come near you
What did I do to make you not talk to me
You are avoiding me and I've asked myself why
I only did it because I had a crush on you
It only made things worse
So I guess you learn from mistakes because
There are some things you just shouldn't do
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Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:31:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You asked me to show you
How could I resist
I wanted you to like me
So after PE in the tennis courts
I lifted my shirt up so you could see
You had a look of excitement
It made me smile
You said that it was nice
I thought we'd be closer
But now you just leave
Any time I come near you
What did I do to make you not talk to me
You are avoiding me and I've asked myself why
I only did it because I had a crush on you
It only made things worse
So I guess you learn from mistakes because
There are some things you just shouldn't do

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-03-19 23:31:38]
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Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:38:16 PM AEST
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too bad you didnt know that before....

Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:10:22 AM AEST
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aww amy this is a great expression.. what a jerk.. you don't need him. sounds like he just wanted a piece .. terrible boy but every thing we go through is a lesson.. great job in expression lil sissy

HUgs
JENNI

Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:53:45 AM AEST
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I'd pat cha on the back-n-that's the way girl 'cause u taught VERY vauablw lEAN CAUSE aT YOUR AGE U KNOW SOMETHING IT TOOK ME MANY YEARS TO LEARN AND i'M 58
that they all jus titty babies and u cut thru the ******** and called his bluff . He don't hate u, he hates himself for wanting u.
I say u r a very inteligent person and I commend u for proving my point.
One lays downs their inhibitions if it's luv. I've known true luv but untill now I've never been in-luv.+
U got five big ole sninen stars from me.
luv, huggs, big ole smiles,
emy

Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:11:08 AM AEST
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Yoy lifted your what??? You so did not tell me this when we where chatting, i so need to talk to you again.

Nice write though.

Janey

Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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Hi Precious-
Howz mah sweetie?? I'm just dropping in to say hi n that I'm online "WAITING" for u c'mon. Anyway men r PIGS!!!!! some times they just do stupid things to hurt us.. However you're right there are just some things we shouldn't do. -sighs- you know what I mean..

W/Luv 4 Lyfe
Care

Re: Some Things You Just Shouldn't Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 12:03:35 AM AEST
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O_O kick ass little poem but I can't beleive my sweet and innocent Amy would do such a thing. *sigh* well, so long as you learned from it. Beides, had he gone for it, you'd have attracked the wrong type of guy.

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