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HUNGER

Immortal agony, this yearning within…
How I long for release from these horrid chains…
Satiate my hunger,
For you are the only one that can…
Free the beast within,
And let me feed on your dead heart…
Caress my longing body,
Nibble on my trembling skin…
Make all my crimson fantasies come true…
Let me taste your satin lips,
Gnaw on your sinister tongue,
Drown in your sea of scarlet essence…

BLOOD

My bittersweet pleasure,
Heavenly sin,
This hot fire coursing through my veins,
Overflowing in my mouth…
Blissful redemption,
I dance to your melody of screams…

Torment…agony…pleasure…

Chained to my wall of torture,
You plead for my forgiveness…
I grow weary of this worthless game,
Your tears do not quench my thirst anymore…
I rip you open with just one swipe of my hand,
The silent night now rings with your painful cries,
Ahhhhh…. Such music you make…
A torrent of bowels and blood galore,
My feast awaits me…
I savor every part of you with the utmost delight,
Drenched in my own ocean of cannibalistic gratification,
Just one taste of you sends my mind reeling…

How long have I wanted you?
Desired you?
My deceiving little lamb,
How long have you lied to me?
Your lifeless eyes reveal to me all your secrets you have kept hidden…


Darling mortal,
You were only of mere flesh…
I… I am Eternal,
That lingering shadow at the corner of your eye,
The creature that sleeps within you,
The immortal that loved you…
And now you are mine,
Within my dead heart,
Coursing through these empty veins…
I stole your life,
With just one deadly kiss…

I am Mistress of the Night,
The monster in your nightmare,
The drinker of your precious red wine…


I am

BLOOD FLOWER



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Beast of Blood

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:25:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Ravenous…unbearable…endless…

HUNGER

Immortal agony, this yearning within…
How I long for release from these horrid chains…
Satiate my hunger,
For you are the only one that can…
Free the beast within,
And let me feed on your dead heart…
Caress my longing body,
Nibble on my trembling skin…
Make all my crimson fantasies come true…
Let me taste your satin lips,
Gnaw on your sinister tongue,
Drown in your sea of scarlet essence…

BLOOD

My bittersweet pleasure,
Heavenly sin,
This hot fire coursing through my veins,
Overflowing in my mouth…
Blissful redemption,
I dance to your melody of screams…

Torment…agony…pleasure…

Chained to my wall of torture,
You plead for my forgiveness…
I grow weary of this worthless game,
Your tears do not quench my thirst anymore…
I rip you open with just one swipe of my hand,
The silent night now rings with your painful cries,
Ahhhhh…. Such music you make…
A torrent of bowels and blood galore,
My feast awaits me…
I savor every part of you with the utmost delight,
Drenched in my own ocean of cannibalistic gratification,
Just one taste of you sends my mind reeling…

How long have I wanted you?
Desired you?
My deceiving little lamb,
How long have you lied to me?
Your lifeless eyes reveal to me all your secrets you have kept hidden…


Darling mortal,
You were only of mere flesh…
I… I am Eternal,
That lingering shadow at the corner of your eye,
The creature that sleeps within you,
The immortal that loved you…
And now you are mine,
Within my dead heart,
Coursing through these empty veins…
I stole your life,
With just one deadly kiss…

I am Mistress of the Night,
The monster in your nightmare,
The drinker of your precious red wine…


I am

BLOOD FLOWER







Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-03-19 17:25:33]
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Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:50:20 PM AEST
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creepy ,tho nicely written.


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 06:01:24 PM AEST
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WOW Stephy!!!
This is SOOOO powerful!!!
A true piece of dominence, it flows well, has much on the surface as well as below.
Creepy, yes but thrilling too!


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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lol was suprised how well the poem flowed into the rhythm of the music i was listening at, enjoyed the poem


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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I LOVE all of your work! You never cease to amaze me! You are truelly one of the best and original poets! Keep it up. And I love how you ended this poem, with your name,.. but not with "FleurdeSang" but with Blood Flower, which gave this poem so much more depth and strength!!!!
ALINA


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:54:46 AM AEST
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Wow powerful dark poem.

As only you could make the reader feel the emotions within.

Magnificent

Love Angelxxx


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:57:05 PM AEST
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Wow you are such an inspiration. I love how
you weave such beautiful poetry into your
darkest thoughts. In summary this poem
***** rules... I will now shut up and go read it again.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Beast of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagacious on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:51:41 AM AEST
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A tale of blood, revenge, and debt to the devil come due. Shocking, yet deliciously brutal [read: honest] vivisection (and consumption) of an untrue heart. However, though gothic in its bloody detail, your poem bespeaks of a pain which justifies the literary act of violence.

Many tortured souls will be drawn to your work, and it is for them that you offer the greatest hope for release. Those who would censor such images should be reminded: there is evil in each of us. Only its exposition, by those courageous enough to come to terms with their innermost regions, can defeat it.

Thank you, Stephy, for never flinching in the face of evil--and for always, in the end, standing for what is good and right and beautiful in the universe. Yours in light, -KAC-




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