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Array ( [sid] => 87951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lover Im Broken [time] => 2005-03-18 23:24:13 [hometext] => I wrote this just kinda randomly..the first part is kind of something im going through right now, the second part is what i hope doesnt happen.. [bodytext] => Your tainted words spoken so delicatly into my ear,
They found a perfect spot in the depths of my heart .
Used and abused,
I eagerly breathed in this new love.
You were sweet in gentle in all that you did,
Perfection was the only thing my trusting eyes saw.
You grasped my hand tightly as we spun around in circles,
"I`ll never let you go" you yelled as we fell to the ground.
Together we looked up at the night stars from the warm pavement,
Imagining all the new places our love could take us..
Dreaming about a fairytail life that would never become a reality.

Then one chilly night as we layed alone together,
I gazed softly into your deep brown eyes,
Instantly i felt that something was different.
"Im sorry..it cant go on" you said to me.
All at once, i collapsed onto the cold cement.
You wiped a burning tear off my cheek.
I mumbled something then sobed again.
Then watched as you slowly rose up.
Turning around to face a newly formed path.
You began to slowly walk away..into a new life.
I knew you would never turn back and face my pleading eyes,
You were leaving me for all eternity.
Leaving me alone, scared, and my heart shattered into a million peices.




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Lover Im Broken

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:24:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Your tainted words spoken so delicatly into my ear,
They found a perfect spot in the depths of my heart .
Used and abused,
I eagerly breathed in this new love.
You were sweet in gentle in all that you did,
Perfection was the only thing my trusting eyes saw.
You grasped my hand tightly as we spun around in circles,
"I`ll never let you go" you yelled as we fell to the ground.
Together we looked up at the night stars from the warm pavement,
Imagining all the new places our love could take us..
Dreaming about a fairytail life that would never become a reality.

Then one chilly night as we layed alone together,
I gazed softly into your deep brown eyes,
Instantly i felt that something was different.
"Im sorry..it cant go on" you said to me.
All at once, i collapsed onto the cold cement.
You wiped a burning tear off my cheek.
I mumbled something then sobed again.
Then watched as you slowly rose up.
Turning around to face a newly formed path.
You began to slowly walk away..into a new life.
I knew you would never turn back and face my pleading eyes,
You were leaving me for all eternity.
Leaving me alone, scared, and my heart shattered into a million peices.








Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2005-03-18 23:24:13]
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Re: Lover Im Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 09:20:26 PM AEST
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Wow Kaylee...for real, a big...BIG wow! Your progression in your poetry is tremendously noticable and it is sooooo good. how's the msn messenger situation going? I really hate how we don't talk much any more. I really hope we can talk later

Mason


Re: Lover Im Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:31:30 PM AEST
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This is really great kay! I really hope your situation works out for u. I really liked how u put what might happen on the second part..very creative lol. Well anyways great job keep it up! Love you,
Kristen




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