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[sid] => 8794
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => another day in time
[time] => 2002-12-18 05:30:00
[hometext] => For ones eye's who'll never see it,,,
[bodytext] => I write this letter,,for she'll never read,,
good-bye,, was the last thing she said,,
when i walked away,,I closed my eye's,,
wondering what went wrong,,
the only thing that she gave me,,
was a life full of meaning,,
wanting to have ,,wanting to give,,
a love, a lifetime,,
an envelope in my hand,,
a letter full of words,,
a title full of meanings,,
for one who walks alone,,
another day in time,,is what it said,
for I never saw her again,,
I think of her more that often,,
more often than i should,,
she was part of my life,,
to the Islands we would go,,
a wife she would be,,
had gone away,,
another day in time,,
she said as I left,,
another day in time,,
was not mine to have,,
for she's not mine,,and I'm not her's,,
for I wish it were another day in time,,
I wouldn't have left her ,,
maybe then she would have been my wife,,
another day in time ,,
is what we all dream about,,
what if ?
It was another day in time,,,,
craig s. meeks
[comments] => 5
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[ratings] => 1
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => LoveRemembered
)
another day in time
Contributed by
spooky
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I write this letter,,for she'll never read,,
good-bye,, was the last thing she said,,
when i walked away,,I closed my eye's,,
wondering what went wrong,,
the only thing that she gave me,,
was a life full of meaning,,
wanting to have ,,wanting to give,,
a love, a lifetime,,
an envelope in my hand,,
a letter full of words,,
a title full of meanings,,
for one who walks alone,,
another day in time,,is what it said,
for I never saw her again,,
I think of her more that often,,
more often than i should,,
she was part of my life,,
to the Islands we would go,,
a wife she would be,,
had gone away,,
another day in time,,
she said as I left,,
another day in time,,
was not mine to have,,
for she's not mine,,and I'm not her's,,
for I wish it were another day in time,,
I wouldn't have left her ,,
maybe then she would have been my wife,,
another day in time ,,
is what we all dream about,,
what if ?
It was another day in time,,,,
craig s. meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
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2002-12-18 05:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: another day in time
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:13:54 AM AEST (User
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Craig,this was a great poem for you! I liked this,even though its sad!Christina |
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Re: another day in time
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST (User
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Awww i think she should see it..but im a sucker for love.....thanks for sharing this one craig it's beautifully written just as all your other poetry is...
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Re: another day in time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:41:56 PM AEST (User
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Great Write |
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Re: another day in time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Roshie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST (User
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This brings back memories, very well written thank you for sharing. =) |
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Re: another day in time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:12:38 PM AEST (User
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I love this....it's beautiful...sad but lovely..
Jenni |
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