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Array ( [sid] => 87884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Beautiful Land... [time] => 2005-03-18 14:02:48 [hometext] => An English assignment that I had 10 minutes to do.. Hope y'all enjoy. Merci. [bodytext] => Warm breezes...
Hushed whispers from the waves in the distance...
Crystal, cerulean skies...
The world seems to breathe with you,
A long,
Slow,
Sigh of,

FREEDOM.....

A tropical paradise of sorts,
But this one is mine...
My own special haven,
Of blissful,

SOLITUDE...

Overwhelmed by prystine ocean, all around me,
Infinite, Calm,

ABYSS....

I take in a breath,
Of salty pleasure,
And I know...

I

AM

HOME...

The birthplace of my mother and father,
And every generation before...
An island,
Long Forgotten...
The essence that flows through

My
Veins...

CUBA [comments] => 6 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 19 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

My Beautiful Land...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:02:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Warm breezes...
Hushed whispers from the waves in the distance...
Crystal, cerulean skies...
The world seems to breathe with you,
A long,
Slow,
Sigh of,

FREEDOM.....

A tropical paradise of sorts,
But this one is mine...
My own special haven,
Of blissful,

SOLITUDE...

Overwhelmed by prystine ocean, all around me,
Infinite, Calm,

ABYSS....

I take in a breath,
Of salty pleasure,
And I know...

I

AM

HOME...

The birthplace of my mother and father,
And every generation before...
An island,
Long Forgotten...
The essence that flows through

My
Veins...

CUBA

Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-03-18 14:02:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:48:25 PM AEST
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wow that was amazing work for 10 minutes :) brilliant
pix xx

Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:32:07 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I ENJOYED THE

EXPERIENCE . . .

DORIAN CHAMBERS

Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:50:15 AM AEST
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Took my breath away. There is no place like home.

Simply supreme in 10 mins you managed to capture the beauty of this land.

Well done bravo

Distinction for sure

love Angelxxxx

Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:53:55 AM AEST
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Hi Stephy...this is absolutely beautiful and so picturesque!
Enjoyed this write of one of my Caribbean Inlands...
Thank fou for sharing this...and also for your lovely comment on my last post....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagacious on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:41:13 PM AEST
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My dear friend! So many months have I known you, yet only recently have I learned of your strong Cuban connection. Shame on me, I say! In these few lines you have brought the old Cuba--dignified, yet sultry; proud, yet humble--to life for me in a way that it never has been before. All this in ten minutes of an English assigment! Bless you, sweet Fleur--always! More to come, -KAC-

Re: My Beautiful Land... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:58:25 PM AEST
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as amazed as all others that this was together in ten minutes ... a true testament to your poetic mind Stephy ~

A beautiful tapestry of words ... and images.

Nazmythian ~

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