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[aid] => mick
[title] => I Don't Love You
[time] => 2005-03-18 13:42:23
[hometext] => Although said in anger it hurt, I never thought you'd say that to me...
[bodytext] => You told me this & it killed me inside,
Now I really do feel like a part of me died,
We were getting on so very well,
Now I have tossed you back down in hell.
Words said in anger hurt lovers so,
It is the most hurtful & deadliest blow,
Tears through your heart like a tidal wave,
Leaving you wishing you were dead in your grave.
Well that’s how I am feeling right now,
I want to make things right but I just don’t know how,
You held me close so close to your chest,
To feel cuddles like that I must really be blessed.
If I lost you my lover, my best friend,
I couldn’t carry on so my life would end,
We’ve been through so much in these 2 & a half years,
Shared all the laughter & all the tears.
All I have ever wanted from life is love,
To find a man who was a gift from above,
I found him & now he is drifting away,
As me & my lover are once again depressions prey.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 177
[topic] => 32
[informant] => pixie
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 21
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SadPoetry
)
I Don't Love You
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You told me this & it killed me inside,
Now I really do feel like a part of me died,
We were getting on so very well,
Now I have tossed you back down in hell.
Words said in anger hurt lovers so,
It is the most hurtful & deadliest blow,
Tears through your heart like a tidal wave,
Leaving you wishing you were dead in your grave.
Well that’s how I am feeling right now,
I want to make things right but I just don’t know how,
You held me close so close to your chest,
To feel cuddles like that I must really be blessed.
If I lost you my lover, my best friend,
I couldn’t carry on so my life would end,
We’ve been through so much in these 2 & a half years,
Shared all the laughter & all the tears.
All I have ever wanted from life is love,
To find a man who was a gift from above,
I found him & now he is drifting away,
As me & my lover are once again depressions prey.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-18 13:42:23]
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:51:52 PM AEST
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Oh hun...don't let it go. Love doesn't stop just like that, you can't turn it off. It doesn't work that way.
He does love you...and I'm sure he know you love him too.
I know you two can make it. I just know it.
Such a sas write my friend..
I hope I see something happy from you soon.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:54:16 PM AEST
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Your writes are an emotional rollercoaster, anger, hurt, love etc.
Fantastic work.
Johnny. |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:13:45 PM AEST
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| im so sorry...very good write |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:24:55 PM AEST
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My dearest pixie... I am sorry for all this pain and sorow you have been given. To hear such hateful words could truly end someone's life, and kill someone's soul... I hope all will get better for you soon, cheeri. You do not deserve this. Depression is a sly fiend... Don't let it take over you, honey... It is so very easy to succumb to it's bittersweet lullaby... I have faith in you..
I know you are much stronger than this, and can fight it. Know that there is always a helping hand here in YPDC. Whenver you need to talk to someone, anyone.. I'm here for you, hun. PM me whenver you like. Thank you for sharing this somber masterpiece. An excellent release to all of your emotions hidden deep within... My love and blessings to you, cheri pixie. Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy! *Fleur* |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:42:40 PM AEST
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| Your writes are always a pleasure to read, even though the circumstances under which theyre written can be so sad at times. i don't have any real answers to life's problems, only cliches like these things only make you stronger. I really admire your ability to describe yourself so easily through rhyme and verse though, and this was no exception. Best of luck to you in all things that can make you happy! When it's all over, you'll breathe again. |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:17:36 PM AEST
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Such a sad and emotional write, Pixie.
Hang in there girl. True love always has a way of working itself out. You're a strong woman and I know u both can work this out.
Chin up sweet girl and ya can pm me darls if ya need anything at all okay my friend.
Take care and heartfelt prayers for u.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:19:32 PM AEST
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Another clever write Pixie
Awsome feelings there actually...
Hope your best friend/ your lover and you
CAN work it out....
take care now
!~ |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:46:01 PM AEST
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SORRY 4 YOUR PAIN PIXIE, IN TIME ALL THINGS WORK OUT, KEEP UP THE
BEAUTIFUL AND ESSENSIAL WRITTING IF
NOTHING MORE THAN 4 LOVE IT SELF . . .
WISH U A GENTLE HEALING . . . ((((4U))))
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:39:22 AM AEST
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Another wonderful write..and it is very sad..
...hugs dear lady :-) venkat
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 02:49:23 AM AEST
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Oohhh Krissie im so sorry to hear this, i know i've been busy and im so sorry. I know things where going very well, this was such a shock.
He loves you hun and there's no doubt in my mind that you two will work things out, just be positive im always here ok.
*Hugs you Tons*
Jane |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:49:25 AM AEST
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Pix, as always i loved your poem. But :-( It makes me sad too. Partly because i'm having this EXACT same problem right now. Imma Pm you and tell you more. *Hugs* And much love
~Alucia~ |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:14:11 AM AEST
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you flow so sadly dear pixie
I wish only good things for you
hang on
The SecretWind |
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Re: I Don't Love You
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:51:59 PM AEST
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"Tears through your heart like a tidal wave,"
I know that exact feeling. When something knocks you back like that and it really does feel like crushing cold waves.
"As me & my lover are once again depressions prey."
It seems that Jared and I sometimes wind up on the same depression cycle and when our lows hit at the same time there's no telling how long it will last since we both look to each other for help and for comfort but can't when we're both feeling so low.
I hope things get better for you soon.
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea
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