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lost within
confused and alone without
Where to turn?

Another time
some other face
who are you?
why are you in this place?

Drenched in dark shadows
crimson rain pouring through veins
lost inside the void
searching to find the answers
yet choking on bitterness
of the pain.

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battle within

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:25:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fighting a battle within
lost within
confused and alone without
Where to turn?

Another time
some other face
who are you?
why are you in this place?

Drenched in dark shadows
crimson rain pouring through veins
lost inside the void
searching to find the answers
yet choking on bitterness
of the pain.

JENNI

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Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:28:09 AM AEST
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i like this poem because we can all relate to it. Its short and sweet.

Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:37:47 AM AEST
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Hey Jen,
this is a masterpeice.
Good work. Keep it up.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:48:17 AM AEST
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short well expressed and another awesome poem...I can really relate to this poem...and i enjoyed reading it...

Clark

Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:03:16 PM AEST
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WOAH!!!
Blow me away, Jenni!
This is just... perfect...
"Fighting a battle within
lost within
confused and alone without
Where to turn?"
I love it... That 3rd line really brings out the confusion you feel... "without" is used so exquisitely here... amazing.
Brav-O!

Lots of love and peace,

Chelsea

Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:24:28 PM AEST
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pick yourself up and try again. ....lost inside the void really screamed at me... I like it...

Re: battle within (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 05:49:25 AM AEST
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Wow, short and....uh...awesome :)

Very creative.

Thanks for sharing.

Take care,

Tim
:-)

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